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11/5/2008 c1 29Vince Loring
wow. this one is very good. long, but very good. i like the imagery. hope you find someone to melt that ice.
10/5/2008 c1 50risaisis
Wow! That was really amazing; I love how you compared the heart to the desolate land of... some wasteland-y place. XD

I really like your writing style :) It was really deep, well-written. :D

-xx
9/27/2008 c1 9You'llAlwaysBeMyThunder
This is amazing...

i love it...

it's alot like a current situation that i'm in right now...

it's really inspiring...

i love it... alot
9/8/2008 c1 16PopMakesMeBurpy
wow. i literally almost started to cry then i remembered that im in the field house and dont want to make a scene. haha.
7/20/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
I absolutely love the narrative voice here. The first line about warm milk immediately caught my attention. Very well done. I love it!

Can't wait to read more from you!

- Koki

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