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7/19/2008 c1 Counting Petals
Review Marathon! (If this means nothing to you, there's an explanation/link on my profile.)

Your descriptions were brilliant; I could almost feel everything she was feeling. I gasped at the end, when the realization hit with what had happened to her, and I was horrified. I also liked that you chose not to name this girl, that she was faceless, because it made it seem more general, reminding us that this happens much too often, whether we want to acknowledge it or not.

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