for Sequel of Life7/23/2008 c1 
6concerto49
It's very emotional and you take the care to depict each bit of detail. Some interesting twists to an average story. The characters sure seem hectic. It's very warm yet engaging. Perhaps you could improve on your sentences.
6concerto49It's very emotional and you take the care to depict each bit of detail. Some interesting twists to an average story. The characters sure seem hectic. It's very warm yet engaging. Perhaps you could improve on your sentences.
7/22/2008 c1 4Renee Anne
Brilliant, keep up the good work! I really liked it and it was well written and strongly worded. I'm expecting great things from you!
4Renee AnneBrilliant, keep up the good work! I really liked it and it was well written and strongly worded. I'm expecting great things from you!
7/21/2008 c1 9haveyouseenmyhaggis
That was...breathtaking! It really was amazing! I loved it!
I really liked the idea of a sequel to life. It's believable and heartwarming. It was a brilliant story and I loved it!
Amazing! I hope you write more for FictionPress!
~Paula~
9haveyouseenmyhaggisThat was...breathtaking! It really was amazing! I loved it!
I really liked the idea of a sequel to life. It's believable and heartwarming. It was a brilliant story and I loved it!
Amazing! I hope you write more for FictionPress!
~Paula~