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11/1/2009 c1 38Around.the.Rainbow
Hm...that was short, but in a way...quite deep. And I mean in a good way.

I like it though. The ending's almost bittersweet though. cause they're alive tonight, but you're not sure if it'll be that way the next night.

good job =]

~Karrah
8/8/2008 c1 24Mistress of Eternity
Though as you said, the context eludes me, this piece is powerful. Simplicity of words really brings the emotions to the surface and makes them relatable; even though I cannot personally relate to the idea.

Well done.

-Anna
7/20/2008 c1 989East-0f-Eden
it was like looking through a broken mirror. I liked it.
7/20/2008 c1 a friend
It's powerful stuff, this. Best wishes.
7/20/2008 c1 21Faith Adeline
it's choppy, but that works for this particular kind of piece. good job, and if this is based on "real life" I hope the person is alright.

Faith

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