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7/21/2008 c1 22LucifersAngel14
I like this. Its really moving. Well done x
7/21/2008 c1 19Eternity's Rain
The last part has got some very interesting contradictions. I don't really like the first part though. It's a bit...well, repetitive, I suppose, and lovesick sounding. This paragraph though, was amazing:

I cry

For my fallen dreams

I cry

Because it was I who ripped their wings

All in all, a very good poem.

Keep writing. Keep reviewing.
7/21/2008 c1 1Ibirau
wow twas lots of crying... wondering if s/he'll find something beyond the death

or is it just ending

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