for A Fairytale Ending4/29/2001 c1 Naomi-chan
::grips her hankerchief:: Oh, that was beautiful! I really do love the way you write. ^_^; The prince was so sweet... I need one. ^_~ As I always say, stay chipper and keep up the good work!
::grips her hankerchief:: Oh, that was beautiful! I really do love the way you write. ^_^; The prince was so sweet... I need one. ^_~ As I always say, stay chipper and keep up the good work!
4/19/2001 c1 sAaNicHaAtsAvRiA
hmm...nice poetic structure...good flow...wow..i could use these for lyrics for my choral compositions...LoL~...j/k ...it's ur copyrite...
"Raindrops like diamonds fall"..suggest something lighter to compare raindrops to since we're not talking about a moderate rainfall here...
"sWiShiNg oF fAiRy WiNgS"...hmm..how big are them fairies?
ok...i don't hold a degree in english so by the looks of it it's reallie good so far
hehe
hmm...nice poetic structure...good flow...wow..i could use these for lyrics for my choral compositions...LoL~...j/k ...it's ur copyrite...
"Raindrops like diamonds fall"..suggest something lighter to compare raindrops to since we're not talking about a moderate rainfall here...
"sWiShiNg oF fAiRy WiNgS"...hmm..how big are them fairies?
ok...i don't hold a degree in english so by the looks of it it's reallie good so far
hehe
4/16/2001 c1 Wynode From ur ICQ LIST
Really Good Technique (I really like that part "Raindrops like diamonds fall
...To serve as chandeliers upon leaves") but I think u need to focus a bit more on your overall story/plot.
Hope dats some good feedback 4 ya! :)
LaTeRR!
-Winodh
Really Good Technique (I really like that part "Raindrops like diamonds fall
...To serve as chandeliers upon leaves") but I think u need to focus a bit more on your overall story/plot.
Hope dats some good feedback 4 ya! :)
LaTeRR!
-Winodh
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