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7/27/2008 c1 xLittleBlackConverse
This is so beautiful. I just kept reading it again and again. I love it! =]
7/21/2008 c1 102The Hippie Nerd
This is really good, there's a unique character about it that gives us a sense that we're really getting to know you. I like the quirkiness and there's some fantastic lines in here.

"If you can find me person, I will show you a tree.

I will point you in the wrong direction,

because it has better scenery." That's got to be my favourite- poetic, well-written, has depth, and is humourous all at once.

The repeated stanza at the beginning and end are very effective at bringing things full circle, and they're great lines to repeat as well. I love that you promise us these words are always true "most of the time."

The poem gives you a lot to think about, a lot of well-written lines, and a dose of humour throughout, and you handle it all very well. Bravo!

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