
1/15/2017 c36 Skylar
loved it so muuuuch awesome story
loved it so muuuuch awesome story
11/18/2016 c1
211starlord11
I think that it was an ADORABLE STORY and i really enjoyed reading story could have been a little more developed though.

I think that it was an ADORABLE STORY and i really enjoyed reading story could have been a little more developed though.
2/19/2016 c36
75AlysonSerenaStone
Wonderful story! I must say that I enjoyed the fluffiness of it very much!

Wonderful story! I must say that I enjoyed the fluffiness of it very much!
8/14/2015 c25 Guest
Okay, so I got this far into this story but I cannot read anymore. Although the concept of this story is good, it is simply too disjointed. None of the problems ever come to a real conclusion. And while most of your reviewers seem to find the main characters randomness funny she never develops... for that matter none of your characters experience significant growth. Also, just stringing together random words to make a 'abnormal' saying does not benefit your character at all. All of the characters come across as five instead of teenagers in High school, even the parents. The businessman dad being the exception, and he only has like five lines. I feel like if you go back through this story and edit and rewrite some parts it will be worth reading. Until then I will not finish this story.
TerminalllyStuck
Okay, so I got this far into this story but I cannot read anymore. Although the concept of this story is good, it is simply too disjointed. None of the problems ever come to a real conclusion. And while most of your reviewers seem to find the main characters randomness funny she never develops... for that matter none of your characters experience significant growth. Also, just stringing together random words to make a 'abnormal' saying does not benefit your character at all. All of the characters come across as five instead of teenagers in High school, even the parents. The businessman dad being the exception, and he only has like five lines. I feel like if you go back through this story and edit and rewrite some parts it will be worth reading. Until then I will not finish this story.
TerminalllyStuck
5/2/2015 c36 annayh44
I love this story so much seriously most amazing and funny loving story ever. .i love Angel alot Justin and all their friends. .love you who write this story
I love this story so much seriously most amazing and funny loving story ever. .i love Angel alot Justin and all their friends. .love you who write this story
2/1/2015 c2 fade
I cringed so much on that overly cliche line 'because im not in love with you like all those other girls!' Yup i feel vomit coming up my throat. It was good till that line came up.
I cringed so much on that overly cliche line 'because im not in love with you like all those other girls!' Yup i feel vomit coming up my throat. It was good till that line came up.
4/22/2014 c36 Guest
This was so cute awwww thanks for making my day!
This was so cute awwww thanks for making my day!
3/6/2014 c18 Guest
Susan is REALLY dumb . Like duhhh Natalie did it all signs point to her Anybody with comin sense would know .
Susan is REALLY dumb . Like duhhh Natalie did it all signs point to her Anybody with comin sense would know .
9/29/2013 c2
4Princess Wanderer
Tuesday November 6th is always election day. They would be out of school.

Tuesday November 6th is always election day. They would be out of school.
9/11/2013 c2 Anonymous Whatchamacallit
Or until I find a reason to throw him into a sea of angry Barneys... Lol... Don't forget the angels... LOl... THis is so funny...
Or until I find a reason to throw him into a sea of angry Barneys... Lol... Don't forget the angels... LOl... THis is so funny...
6/21/2013 c1 Hannah Raine
Same middle name! Boo yah
Same middle name! Boo yah