for The State of Everything8/2/2008 c1 
42Starfire17
I liked this. It's a bit abstract and takes a few reads to fully understand but that just complements the poem itself and makes it more interesting. To me it convey's a sense of almost helplessness. Good work!
42Starfire17I liked this. It's a bit abstract and takes a few reads to fully understand but that just complements the poem itself and makes it more interesting. To me it convey's a sense of almost helplessness. Good work!