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8/5/2008 c2 612simpleplan13
Again the split between I and argue seemed a bit odd.

I liked this a lot. I liked how you connected it with the last piece by using the word blind. The descriptions are again really interesting. I also like how you picked an unusual word, makes the piece even more original.
8/5/2008 c1 simpleplan13
I like this, it's an interesting way to describe being blind and it flowed well. The only thing is having the word listen on it's own line read a bit awkwardly. I know you did it for the spelling and I'm not sure if there's a different way to phrase it, but just thought I'd mention it.
7/31/2008 c1 50In the Rye
i think this one is my favorite. but i like how they all describe the word they are in more of a philosophical manner than just a dictionary definition.

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