
7/24/2008 c1
84tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis
Awesomely said. I like the "heartbreak flavored smile" and "towards forever". Great job.

Awesomely said. I like the "heartbreak flavored smile" and "towards forever". Great job.
7/24/2008 c1
33ChapeauVert
"Lead me back to your heartbreak flavoured smile" is gorgeous. I love this whole poem. Beautiful

"Lead me back to your heartbreak flavoured smile" is gorgeous. I love this whole poem. Beautiful