for The Best Winter Break Ever!2/8/2010 c5 
15blonde roots
Aghghgh! you need to update this, girl! you're leaving me in suspense! plz... I wanna know what's in the envelope!
-Grace E. Lane
15blonde rootsAghghgh! you need to update this, girl! you're leaving me in suspense! plz... I wanna know what's in the envelope!
-Grace E. Lane
9/25/2009 c1 blonde roots
Glory! You are really talented! This story is so good! Write more! What's in the envelope? Oh, and are the characters based on real people? Tell me!
By the way, it's much easier to read your stories when they're typed :)!
I was a little confused on the last page with all the dialog, but other than that, it was great!
Glory! You are really talented! This story is so good! Write more! What's in the envelope? Oh, and are the characters based on real people? Tell me!
By the way, it's much easier to read your stories when they're typed :)!
I was a little confused on the last page with all the dialog, but other than that, it was great!
11/28/2008 c5 19Zoey McCusker
I want to know what the note said! Glory, i cannot believe you just dropped the story like that! But anyways, I loved the addition of a boy to the scene! :) But yeah, I was also very impressed with your grammar! It gets a thumbs up for improvement. It was a little too short for my taste but a good continuation, in my opinion.
Keep it up!
19Zoey McCuskerI want to know what the note said! Glory, i cannot believe you just dropped the story like that! But anyways, I loved the addition of a boy to the scene! :) But yeah, I was also very impressed with your grammar! It gets a thumbs up for improvement. It was a little too short for my taste but a good continuation, in my opinion.
Keep it up!
8/23/2008 c1 5BenWireman
Blah! that is wat i say to this... this...idk what it is but it is not cherry and gay like what i need to be reading! stop cussing!
5BenWiremanBlah! that is wat i say to this... this...idk what it is but it is not cherry and gay like what i need to be reading! stop cussing!
8/6/2008 c4 19Zoey McCusker
Nice, nice, nice! What took u so long? You know, to be honest, it was good up til now, but now it's better! I really liked how u wove everything we talked about together.
You did have a few gramatical errors. I picked up three obvious ones.
I especially like the competition between the girls!
Great work and keep coming!
19Zoey McCuskerNice, nice, nice! What took u so long? You know, to be honest, it was good up til now, but now it's better! I really liked how u wove everything we talked about together.
You did have a few gramatical errors. I picked up three obvious ones.
I especially like the competition between the girls!
Great work and keep coming!
7/28/2008 c3 Zoey McCusker
Nice continuation! I really like the smart-aleck character of Ally and the neat nickname of 'Jazz'. That is so u! I can't wait to see what happens with Ally.
Now, Glory, u still have thsoe gramatical errors... :)) But the one that i felt i should point out is harbored in the second paragraph, "tripped down the stairs." Did you mean to say that or did you mean to say "skipped"?
Anywho, i like it!
Happy writing!
Nice continuation! I really like the smart-aleck character of Ally and the neat nickname of 'Jazz'. That is so u! I can't wait to see what happens with Ally.
Now, Glory, u still have thsoe gramatical errors... :)) But the one that i felt i should point out is harbored in the second paragraph, "tripped down the stairs." Did you mean to say that or did you mean to say "skipped"?
Anywho, i like it!
Happy writing!
7/26/2008 c2 Zoey McCusker
Hey! I really like the character of Jasmine. I have no clue why, but... she's very realistic and very... oh, i don't know... likeable. Look what you've done! You've made me speechless! :) You should definitely keep working on it and let us know what happens next!
Love ya!
Zo... hehe!
Hey! I really like the character of Jasmine. I have no clue why, but... she's very realistic and very... oh, i don't know... likeable. Look what you've done! You've made me speechless! :) You should definitely keep working on it and let us know what happens next!
Love ya!
Zo... hehe!
7/26/2008 c1 Zoey McCusker
Why'd u stop there! I was just getting into it! You should definitely keep writing and let us know who the person behind the door is!
I love how creative, but yet down to earth you are with your stories.
Yes, there were gramatical errors, but i know u can fix that! :)
Keep writing and ill keep reading!
Why'd u stop there! I was just getting into it! You should definitely keep writing and let us know who the person behind the door is!
I love how creative, but yet down to earth you are with your stories.
Yes, there were gramatical errors, but i know u can fix that! :)
Keep writing and ill keep reading!