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9/1/2008 c1 1melodymaker06
this is really, really good! i love it! :)
8/14/2008 c4 13Immortal dragon
The story line is good. I like your main character.

You have some grammatical errors and stuff like that, but overall its still good. The only advice I can give you is to pay more attention to your grammar and spelling.

Hope to hear more though.
7/26/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
Ooh. . .!

Fantastic start. I love the concept of this.

Looking forward to more!

- Koki

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