Reviews: Shine | FictionPress

9/25/2008 c1

140Chidaruma Kamisori
This makes me think of the haiku I'm trying to write in Spanish.

You are a great writer, and it is so amazing to see such a talent writing in a second language.

-C.K.

9/16/2008 c1

49Hope's Demise
hey thanks for the review!

anyway,

I really like this. it's good!

xx

8/19/2008 c1

23fatbird33
this was cute

7/28/2008 c1

99night62611
wow def one of the better haikus i've read today, a perfect poem...

7/27/2008 c1

46Seven Rose
VERY nice haiku

I'm not good at titles either, as long as the poem is good

how nice to be known as shining forever

7/26/2008 c1

19Dreizehn
ohh, i love this! i'm more a dark writer myself but a kno a good haiku when i see one ^-^

7/26/2008 c1

70PoetryQueen
I'm not a haiku fan, but this was pretty good!