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1/27/2011 c1 33BookcraZzaY
AWESOME POEM

i LOVED IT SO MUCH

IT WAS SO DEEP AND AMAZING IN EVERY LINE

c;

P.S (SORRY BOUT CAPS FORGET THEY WERE ON)

BUT...LOVED THIS SO MUCH

U DID AN AMAZING JOB
6/5/2009 c1 3Asylum Teaparty
I love the way you ended it. I can feel the pain he's feeling
9/14/2008 c1 Alessandro
beautiful, heartbreaking but wonderful as per your other works by dear friend.
7/27/2008 c1 17Olivia Muldoon
Oh... sadness... T_T

It's so beautiful, and so sad. I love it... -hugglies the story-
7/27/2008 c1 53Katie Nicole
Wow. That's very intense and graphic, and also very sad.

It sounds almost like an abusive relationship, like the narrator was the abuser, and he couldn't stand to let go of his partner, even after they've died.

A twisted ending.

I like that you repeat "You promised," because even though it sounds in the beginning like he hurt that person, you feel remorse for the poor fellow.

Excellent work (:

Katie

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