for Bleeding Hearts10/19/2008 c2 lucy
great job! its great!
great job! its great!
7/28/2008 c1 Scribe of Stories
wow. nice! i love the song Because Of You. my fanfiction account is the same here.
wow. nice! i love the song Because Of You. my fanfiction account is the same here.
7/27/2008 c1 Lulu Stories
It's a really nice start, i like the style very descriptive and easy to read but be careful of grammer as there are a few mistakes, and in the fourth paragraph you put some odd capital letters in places.
But very good!
It's a really nice start, i like the style very descriptive and easy to read but be careful of grammer as there are a few mistakes, and in the fourth paragraph you put some odd capital letters in places.
But very good!