for The Doll Store8/7/2008 c1 V.S
OMG! i knew was coming, but it was so good whe nyou led up to it! it creeped me out! good job!
OMG! i knew was coming, but it was so good whe nyou led up to it! it creeped me out! good job!
8/5/2008 c1 
19S. M. Saves
I found the ending to be incredibly funny. "It seems she forgot her change." People being turned into dolls is an old occult classic common in a lot of Japanese Animes. I was a little worried when I started reading this story thinking it was going to be too cliche but I liked it. It had a sort of "personal" flare to it.
19S. M. SavesI found the ending to be incredibly funny. "It seems she forgot her change." People being turned into dolls is an old occult classic common in a lot of Japanese Animes. I was a little worried when I started reading this story thinking it was going to be too cliche but I liked it. It had a sort of "personal" flare to it.
8/5/2008 c1 22Through Glass Eyes
I so saw that coming at it still made me jump:D anyways the almond smell probably came from a treat she was using to get them... poor kids. great story:D
22Through Glass EyesI so saw that coming at it still made me jump:D anyways the almond smell probably came from a treat she was using to get them... poor kids. great story:D
8/5/2008 c1 Krista Marie
This was a really good story. I collect porcelain dolls, so this definitely creeped me out. You are a really good writer, keep up the good work.
This was a really good story. I collect porcelain dolls, so this definitely creeped me out. You are a really good writer, keep up the good work.
8/3/2008 c1 11the ignorance of it all
I love it. Short and sweet, beautifully written, and a funny ending.
Thanks for sharing! =)
11the ignorance of it allI love it. Short and sweet, beautifully written, and a funny ending.
Thanks for sharing! =)
7/28/2008 c1 Danielley2831
Haha. I really liked that one. But, somehow I knew it was going to end like that.
Oh, I know what the almond smell was...
Almond cookies!
Gimmee one?
Please?
Haha. I really liked that one. But, somehow I knew it was going to end like that.
Oh, I know what the almond smell was...
Almond cookies!
Gimmee one?
Please?
7/28/2008 c1 Allcia and Kaede
Isn't the smell of Almond from like some sort of potion that kills people, or puts them to sleep... I'm pretty sure it puts them to sleep though. Funny ending though XD
...what happen's to the lost change...?
Isn't the smell of Almond from like some sort of potion that kills people, or puts them to sleep... I'm pretty sure it puts them to sleep though. Funny ending though XD
...what happen's to the lost change...?