for Color Theory11/17/2009 c1 
29YasuRan
I haven't read a good Suspense fic in ages so THANK YOU for making my day! The allusions to color you worked into this piece were a nice touch. Gotta love ambiguity ;)
29YasuRanI haven't read a good Suspense fic in ages so THANK YOU for making my day! The allusions to color you worked into this piece were a nice touch. Gotta love ambiguity ;)
9/9/2008 c1 13VelvetyCheerio
Oh, so he kills his clients by having them knit? That's kind of scary. Freaky. Good job. I liked the summary. It made me smile. VelvetyCheerio.
13VelvetyCheerioOh, so he kills his clients by having them knit? That's kind of scary. Freaky. Good job. I liked the summary. It made me smile. VelvetyCheerio.
8/13/2008 c1 14Carrollesque
Very well written. Well done. The shrink lacks any clear motivation, though.
Fifth paragraph, 'later' should be 'latter.'
14CarrollesqueVery well written. Well done. The shrink lacks any clear motivation, though.
Fifth paragraph, 'later' should be 'latter.'
7/28/2008 c1 2Arydesia
i love your descriptive writing...you never say 'cass feels this or that', i can just tell her emotions from the words :) creepy, and a depressing ending, but it's a great one shot! please keep writing-i wanna read!
~arydesia
2Arydesiai love your descriptive writing...you never say 'cass feels this or that', i can just tell her emotions from the words :) creepy, and a depressing ending, but it's a great one shot! please keep writing-i wanna read!
~arydesia
7/28/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
I love the ending the way that it is, so please don't change it! The creepiness factor is just amazing. It really takes talent to write something like this. Well done!
- Koki
10Koki EnwaiI love the ending the way that it is, so please don't change it! The creepiness factor is just amazing. It really takes talent to write something like this. Well done!
- Koki
7/28/2008 c1 8DaysTillSunday
Wow. Amazing detail, amazingly written. What else can I say?
It was amazing!
Wow. Amazing detail, amazingly written. What else can I say?
It was amazing!
7/28/2008 c1 12insanities
I definitely think that the ending works - it's my favourite part of this. But the whole story is 'creepy and tense', and I really like the pacing. It's also brilliantly written. :) *adds to favourites*
12insanitiesI definitely think that the ending works - it's my favourite part of this. But the whole story is 'creepy and tense', and I really like the pacing. It's also brilliantly written. :) *adds to favourites*