for Choose Your Wishes Wisely They Could Come True11/14/2008 c1 
72eja-SAN
wow...this really applies to my life except for the last couple lines, but I really like it and your style is so natural! *trying to sound professional*
72eja-SANwow...this really applies to my life except for the last couple lines, but I really like it and your style is so natural! *trying to sound professional*
8/7/2008 c1 cab fed hig
I like the repetition :D
I read it aloud and the words really blend nciely together.
Great job :)
I like the repetition :D
I read it aloud and the words really blend nciely together.
Great job :)
7/29/2008 c1 93dyingtoseethestars
A very relatable poem for me, which in my view, are the best kinds of poems. Love the way you use repitition and how the poem flows. Great job!
93dyingtoseethestarsA very relatable poem for me, which in my view, are the best kinds of poems. Love the way you use repitition and how the poem flows. Great job!