
11/14/2008 c1
72eja-SAN
wow...this really applies to my life except for the last couple lines, but I really like it and your style is so natural! *trying to sound professional*

wow...this really applies to my life except for the last couple lines, but I really like it and your style is so natural! *trying to sound professional*
8/7/2008 c1 cab fed hig
I like the repetition :D
I read it aloud and the words really blend nciely together.
Great job :)
I like the repetition :D
I read it aloud and the words really blend nciely together.
Great job :)
7/29/2008 c1
93dyingtoseethestars
A very relatable poem for me, which in my view, are the best kinds of poems. Love the way you use repitition and how the poem flows. Great job!

A very relatable poem for me, which in my view, are the best kinds of poems. Love the way you use repitition and how the poem flows. Great job!