for Black Dots8/27/2008 c1 
16ValerieYoung
awesomeness! this is really good. anywho i feel bad 4 da gurl haha. still she is stupid 2 go through all tat 4 a stupid guy.
16ValerieYoungawesomeness! this is really good. anywho i feel bad 4 da gurl haha. still she is stupid 2 go through all tat 4 a stupid guy.
8/17/2008 c1 50Lyndotia
I still say this is a really great oneshot, and yes, darn it, I did make you post it because it is GOOD. It really makes you think about what's really going on in people's minds and about how you should be very careful with what you say and do.
50LyndotiaI still say this is a really great oneshot, and yes, darn it, I did make you post it because it is GOOD. It really makes you think about what's really going on in people's minds and about how you should be very careful with what you say and do.
8/11/2008 c1 IncubusShadow
Very cool. This is a brutal story. I really enjoyed the details, the self-loathing, the delusion. You did a great job.
Very cool. This is a brutal story. I really enjoyed the details, the self-loathing, the delusion. You did a great job.