for Stimulation: ATTRACTION10/17/2009 c1 infiniteternity
such a shame that I finally revisited fictionpress after a long time away and created a new account to start "favoriting" anew to find that one of my favorite authors has taken her stories down. However, your reasons are completely justifiable and I'm terribly sorry that has happened to you and poo-poo to those who violated basic ethical integrity. I do hope you continue to write more in the future.
such a shame that I finally revisited fictionpress after a long time away and created a new account to start "favoriting" anew to find that one of my favorite authors has taken her stories down. However, your reasons are completely justifiable and I'm terribly sorry that has happened to you and poo-poo to those who violated basic ethical integrity. I do hope you continue to write more in the future.
3/27/2009 c2 Vaulting Queen
did you mean for her name to be Candy Heart if she got married? cause that is so cool!
did you mean for her name to be Candy Heart if she got married? cause that is so cool!
3/22/2009 c9 grumpirah
I really really need to find an Aurora around here so I can get me some perfume like that.
I really really need to find an Aurora around here so I can get me some perfume like that.
2/20/2009 c9 belisha
hey,
i thought i was a cute end to the story but yeah ur right...i wee bit rushed! especailly since u didnt have very much abt the shop...
thnak god i wasn't caught in the fires but iv been doing alot to voluntry work (so far we've managed to raise $24 0) trying to raise funds so i barely have time to sleep let alone check my email...but i have some ideas to better ur ending so when ever i have time i'll make sure to send them to u...
so many people have died and many of my faily and friends from the area lost loved ones, pets and their home (although the thing they seem to be mourning alot are like photos and videos and such)...
toodles...
xox
hey,
i thought i was a cute end to the story but yeah ur right...i wee bit rushed! especailly since u didnt have very much abt the shop...
thnak god i wasn't caught in the fires but iv been doing alot to voluntry work (so far we've managed to raise $24 0) trying to raise funds so i barely have time to sleep let alone check my email...but i have some ideas to better ur ending so when ever i have time i'll make sure to send them to u...
so many people have died and many of my faily and friends from the area lost loved ones, pets and their home (although the thing they seem to be mourning alot are like photos and videos and such)...
toodles...
xox
2/19/2009 c9 ilmiopassato
Nice ending. Wonder who's gonna get picked for the next story. My condolences for your Nana :-(
Nice ending. Wonder who's gonna get picked for the next story. My condolences for your Nana :-(
2/18/2009 c9 Strangely Natural
*“I can see you swooning at some guy’s feet because he gives you a pebble as his token of love, you know like some penguins do.”* that was too cute, a giggle moment. Great first series, such a sweet and beautiful relationship Will and Candace have, they are so lucky. The last chapter especially was very well written, showing the good character of the wonderful Will, and the true mystic happiness that Aurora's advice delivered to little Candace's busy life: *it’s a shop that provides you with what you need.”* if only shops like this existed in real life ;)
This chapter tied up all the loose ends well and left an enticing opening for the next series, very good indeed. Can't wait for it.
*“I can see you swooning at some guy’s feet because he gives you a pebble as his token of love, you know like some penguins do.”* that was too cute, a giggle moment. Great first series, such a sweet and beautiful relationship Will and Candace have, they are so lucky. The last chapter especially was very well written, showing the good character of the wonderful Will, and the true mystic happiness that Aurora's advice delivered to little Candace's busy life: *it’s a shop that provides you with what you need.”* if only shops like this existed in real life ;)
This chapter tied up all the loose ends well and left an enticing opening for the next series, very good indeed. Can't wait for it.
2/16/2009 c9 LondonLi
Thanks so much for finishing up this story! I'm sorry about your loss and appreciate you posting anyway. Can't wait to see who's next in line!
Thanks so much for finishing up this story! I'm sorry about your loss and appreciate you posting anyway. Can't wait to see who's next in line!
1/30/2009 c8 ilmiopassato
'Nother good one, glad they both decided to move in together. Will and Candace make a great couple, haha. Can't wait for the finale!
'Nother good one, glad they both decided to move in together. Will and Candace make a great couple, haha. Can't wait for the finale!
1/29/2009 c8 jenniesmith
This was great! Sorry I am so late getting here to review... Love that he "kidnapped" her and that in doing so ended up being just what she needed! I love that we have brief introductions of the other gals and am excited to see where this all goes! Great job so far!
xoxo
jennie
This was great! Sorry I am so late getting here to review... Love that he "kidnapped" her and that in doing so ended up being just what she needed! I love that we have brief introductions of the other gals and am excited to see where this all goes! Great job so far!
xoxo
jennie
111/24/2009 c8 Elodie Wolfe
(used to be Middi)
My bad for not logging in. How is life? good I hope. I liked this chapter a lot. Candace and Will are super cute. I wanna see Meg! Especially since we just got to meet Jay. Oh that reminds me, you never went back into the perfume and the Stimulation thing. I was wondering if that had any big play in the story line. Oh and for the title you could also just put Stimulation: (insert title of specific thing here). ;) Can't wait to read more,
Love Elodie~
(used to be Middi)
My bad for not logging in. How is life? good I hope. I liked this chapter a lot. Candace and Will are super cute. I wanna see Meg! Especially since we just got to meet Jay. Oh that reminds me, you never went back into the perfume and the Stimulation thing. I was wondering if that had any big play in the story line. Oh and for the title you could also just put Stimulation: (insert title of specific thing here). ;) Can't wait to read more,
Love Elodie~
1/9/2009 c7 ilmiopassato
Good chapter. I'm glad they finally got together, although that's way more detail than I'd ever want to know, lol. But that's just my own personal preference. Also, though your writing has improved considerably since "Alpha Man", I still find a fair amount of grammatical/punctuation errors in your chapters. If you'd like a second beta to look over your work, I'd be happy to help out. Other than that, can't wait for the next one!
Good chapter. I'm glad they finally got together, although that's way more detail than I'd ever want to know, lol. But that's just my own personal preference. Also, though your writing has improved considerably since "Alpha Man", I still find a fair amount of grammatical/punctuation errors in your chapters. If you'd like a second beta to look over your work, I'd be happy to help out. Other than that, can't wait for the next one!
12/22/2008 c7 MiddiVampira
I liked this chapter a lot. Yay for Candace not freaking out on him. I can't wait for more. Have a good holiday season!
Love Elodie~
I liked this chapter a lot. Yay for Candace not freaking out on him. I can't wait for more. Have a good holiday season!
Love Elodie~
12/22/2008 c7 LondonLi
Wow, they really made up fast! Thanks for the update; it's a nice Christmas present!:)
Wow, they really made up fast! Thanks for the update; it's a nice Christmas present!:)