for Collective1/19/2010 c4 
59Tranquil Thorns
This was my favorite haiku of the bunch. I think there could be a bigger story behind it, and I liked the image you captured.
I like the melancholy tone.
59Tranquil ThornsThis was my favorite haiku of the bunch. I think there could be a bigger story behind it, and I liked the image you captured.
I like the melancholy tone.
8/30/2009 c4 Isca
This is definitely my favourite haiku of the bunch. I adore the personification here of the ivory tower - it longs for freedom and despises its grounded nature. Wow. Excellent work. :)
This is definitely my favourite haiku of the bunch. I adore the personification here of the ivory tower - it longs for freedom and despises its grounded nature. Wow. Excellent work. :)
8/30/2009 c2 Isca
"Night of the red moon." I absolutely love this line - it's perfect in every way.
"Phileosophy." Did you mean 'Philosophy'?
"Claret attraction." Good word choice here.
"Night of the red moon." I absolutely love this line - it's perfect in every way.
"Phileosophy." Did you mean 'Philosophy'?
"Claret attraction." Good word choice here.
8/30/2009 c1 Isca
I applaud you for your use of the word 'quixotic.' However, this haiku didn't flow particularly well. Perhaps it would be better if it went something like this: Quixotic, you're a / Clouded gaze on a bright night / A masochist's dream. The 'clouded gaze' part, I must admit, was rather creative and beautiful - nice imagery. :)
I applaud you for your use of the word 'quixotic.' However, this haiku didn't flow particularly well. Perhaps it would be better if it went something like this: Quixotic, you're a / Clouded gaze on a bright night / A masochist's dream. The 'clouded gaze' part, I must admit, was rather creative and beautiful - nice imagery. :)
8/1/2008 c4 19S. M. Saves
Very mature writings. I like the word usage in each haiku. These aren't an average third grader's haikus. These are an adult's.
Very nice.
19S. M. SavesVery mature writings. I like the word usage in each haiku. These aren't an average third grader's haikus. These are an adult's.
Very nice.