for Street Racer2/16/2009 c11 
4WhataLovelyPenName
Hey, I love the story! Keep up the good writing. Update soon, please and thanks. :)
4WhataLovelyPenNameHey, I love the story! Keep up the good writing. Update soon, please and thanks. :)
1/5/2009 c10 3Duuude
They seem to like to get naked a lot. ;P
I like the story line, your street racing parts are really believable? Have you been watching Fast And Furious movies or maybe you know a little about street racing yourself. As dangerous as it is, yada yada yada, I would love to do that one time.
I always speed when I'm driving and my dad has a bloody heart attack, I swear he speeds even more than me. Just because I'm new at this...
Anyway, I love this story. You've managed to expand well on ... main character who's name I've forgotten's life perfectly. She's had a very complicated life but at least she's got somenone to get naked with now. *winkwink*
BTW Firemen are sexy. I almost feel like setting something on fire now...
I can't wait 'til the serious action comes and she's in the circle. Ahahaha, I'll laugh when they get the stupid bastard who shot her brother's tires out.
Update son, I couldn't get enough of this. I may suffer withdrawal if you don't update quickly enough.
The raunchy scenes were a bit to up there for my hyperventilating lungs though... I feel like an old pervert now. I always feel awkward reading those scenes not because I'm a giggling pre-teen or anything... I'm just like that. I prefer to skip over them.
Your story line is great, the passion between street-racer and firemen is even greater, and your heavenly writing is the greatest.
Update soon.
3DuuudeThey seem to like to get naked a lot. ;P
I like the story line, your street racing parts are really believable? Have you been watching Fast And Furious movies or maybe you know a little about street racing yourself. As dangerous as it is, yada yada yada, I would love to do that one time.
I always speed when I'm driving and my dad has a bloody heart attack, I swear he speeds even more than me. Just because I'm new at this...
Anyway, I love this story. You've managed to expand well on ... main character who's name I've forgotten's life perfectly. She's had a very complicated life but at least she's got somenone to get naked with now. *winkwink*
BTW Firemen are sexy. I almost feel like setting something on fire now...
I can't wait 'til the serious action comes and she's in the circle. Ahahaha, I'll laugh when they get the stupid bastard who shot her brother's tires out.
Update son, I couldn't get enough of this. I may suffer withdrawal if you don't update quickly enough.
The raunchy scenes were a bit to up there for my hyperventilating lungs though... I feel like an old pervert now. I always feel awkward reading those scenes not because I'm a giggling pre-teen or anything... I'm just like that. I prefer to skip over them.
Your story line is great, the passion between street-racer and firemen is even greater, and your heavenly writing is the greatest.
Update soon.
12/23/2008 c10 2Aynn
Well, her cover's gone totally kaput. Even if Neil disappears, there's still a chance that someone will mention that her "brother" was around. Danger. Danger. Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Good job, thank you, and good luck!
2AynnWell, her cover's gone totally kaput. Even if Neil disappears, there's still a chance that someone will mention that her "brother" was around. Danger. Danger. Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Good job, thank you, and good luck!
12/23/2008 c10 belle1220
oh, lots of action. Loved it.
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oh, lots of action. Loved it.
not sure if you know or not, but you have anonymous reviews disabled.
12/7/2008 c9 belle1220
I like this chapter. It's nice to see the progression between Karen and Ben. Glad to know you're not giving up on the story! I look forward to the next chapter :)
I like this chapter. It's nice to see the progression between Karen and Ben. Glad to know you're not giving up on the story! I look forward to the next chapter :)
12/7/2008 c9 renroy
I love your story. I am always on the edge of my seat and i am alwayc exited when u update. Keep up the good work
I love your story. I am always on the edge of my seat and i am alwayc exited when u update. Keep up the good work
11/3/2008 c8 M. R. Roland
Very nice. Quite an interesting chapter. I'll be waiting for your next chapter
Very nice. Quite an interesting chapter. I'll be waiting for your next chapter
11/2/2008 c8 1crazylady4
i absolutely love this story.. its brilliant. what does Ben look like. i have him in my head as something like Joe Manganiello (he plays Owen in one tree hill) any update soon please!
1crazylady4i absolutely love this story.. its brilliant. what does Ben look like. i have him in my head as something like Joe Manganiello (he plays Owen in one tree hill) any update soon please!
11/1/2008 c7 belle1220
I love this story. I just wish there were more chapters to read! Karen and Ben are too adorable for words and I'm really enjoying the street racing part as well.
I love this story. I just wish there were more chapters to read! Karen and Ben are too adorable for words and I'm really enjoying the street racing part as well.