9/22/2008 c5 M. R. Roland
Very nice ending. Your ending for this update left me feeling contented. Hope you can update soon. Keep it up...
Very nice ending. Your ending for this update left me feeling contented. Hope you can update soon. Keep it up...
9/13/2008 c4 Smartass Joker
I LOOVVE this story so far! It's damn near amazing! You should definitely update, like, NOW!
Peace out,
Joker
I LOOVVE this story so far! It's damn near amazing! You should definitely update, like, NOW!
Peace out,
Joker
9/3/2008 c3 AMM3485
This story is awesome. Great job with it! I can't wait for another update and figuring out her past.
This story is awesome. Great job with it! I can't wait for another update and figuring out her past.
8/4/2008 c1 M. R. Roland
Nice, very nice...
Can't wait for your upadate. Hope it doesn't take too long.
Nice, very nice...
Can't wait for your upadate. Hope it doesn't take too long.
8/2/2008 c1 lejahkeyy
hmm undercover story..you could set her to go be queen of the car world, girlfriend of the drift king, and etc...idk just some ideas. but this is a well written beginning so far
hmm undercover story..you could set her to go be queen of the car world, girlfriend of the drift king, and etc...idk just some ideas. but this is a well written beginning so far