for Fall For You10/11/2008 c3 
13blurrylights
I don't think you needed to put in Beau's perspective, because it was kind of obvious. And where are they? On to the next chapter...:)
13blurrylightsI don't think you needed to put in Beau's perspective, because it was kind of obvious. And where are they? On to the next chapter...:)
10/11/2008 c2 blurrylights
Hi!
I'm a new reviewer to this story, obviously. :) I think you are one of the funniest writers ever, and I've read an awful lot. :) I was pretty much dying of laughter during this chapter, and I'm pretty sure my family thinks I'm crazy now. The fact that Anna was straddling Beau made me laugh so hard I almost cried. This story is awesome so far! :)
Hi!
I'm a new reviewer to this story, obviously. :) I think you are one of the funniest writers ever, and I've read an awful lot. :) I was pretty much dying of laughter during this chapter, and I'm pretty sure my family thinks I'm crazy now. The fact that Anna was straddling Beau made me laugh so hard I almost cried. This story is awesome so far! :)
10/11/2008 c21 8princessbleachhead
yey you have definitely made my day.
thank you
thank you
cant wait for the story. uouououououou (dancing)
later
8princessbleachheadyey you have definitely made my day.
thank you
thank you
cant wait for the story. uouououououou (dancing)
later
10/11/2008 c21 7katezilla
YES! NANOWRIMO!
It's my first year too!
I think i'm going to post it as I go
just to get feedback
and YAY!
SEQUEL!
hahaha
New girl thing, That sucks
and your senior year?
yikes
I wish you luck
can't wait :)
7katezillaYES! NANOWRIMO!
It's my first year too!
I think i'm going to post it as I go
just to get feedback
and YAY!
SEQUEL!
hahaha
New girl thing, That sucks
and your senior year?
yikes
I wish you luck
can't wait :)
10/9/2008 c16 Monique Soleil
WHAT? when did dylan become such a coward. COMPLETE CHANGE OF CHARACTER. seriously, why does the bad guy always haf ta be the bad guy? gr... BUT ANYWAY. great story :D
hugs,
Monique Soleil
WHAT? when did dylan become such a coward. COMPLETE CHANGE OF CHARACTER. seriously, why does the bad guy always haf ta be the bad guy? gr... BUT ANYWAY. great story :D
hugs,
Monique Soleil
10/8/2008 c3 Monique Soleil
WAH! i like. :D anyway hee hee.
well, wen u went into mr. davies' point of view, he suddenly became sweeter than mr. jackass. uh. is that a habit? because hes different wen it goes into his point of view. BUT WATEVER. thats just my opinion ;D so so so KEEP REVIEWING!
hugs,
Monique Soleil :O
WAH! i like. :D anyway hee hee.
well, wen u went into mr. davies' point of view, he suddenly became sweeter than mr. jackass. uh. is that a habit? because hes different wen it goes into his point of view. BUT WATEVER. thats just my opinion ;D so so so KEEP REVIEWING!
hugs,
Monique Soleil :O
10/5/2008 c11 kosocielo
That was sick of that guy. Can a 9 year old do that rape someone? Did she went to therapy?
That was sick of that guy. Can a 9 year old do that rape someone? Did she went to therapy?
10/5/2008 c4 kosocielo
I just found your story and I love very very much. I actually like this chapter. I don't like anna's boyfriend. There is something about him maybe it the brother and his friend influence but I don't know.
I just found your story and I love very very much. I actually like this chapter. I don't like anna's boyfriend. There is something about him maybe it the brother and his friend influence but I don't know.
10/4/2008 c19 hcjbsu
OMG! Tisk tisk! I am so sorry! I just realized that I forgot to review this chapter! I did already read it of course! hehe! And I read the next chapter aleready. Ok, time for the constructive criticism.
1) Good dialouge (of course!)
2) description was better (better than last chapter, maybe a bit more description would be nice)
3) Characters (I got a good feel for the characters this chapter not quite as good as in the past but not bad)
4) ending... it was, unfortunately, ok, your ending probably made a lot of readers say, "That was good." But you want them saying, "THAT WAS AMAZING!"
5) semi-random! I was dissapointed that there was no prom king and queen... it is very cliche for tthe main character to get it, but some one could have gotten it!
LOL, overall good though and I have enjoyed reading your story so much!
OMG! Tisk tisk! I am so sorry! I just realized that I forgot to review this chapter! I did already read it of course! hehe! And I read the next chapter aleready. Ok, time for the constructive criticism.
1) Good dialouge (of course!)
2) description was better (better than last chapter, maybe a bit more description would be nice)
3) Characters (I got a good feel for the characters this chapter not quite as good as in the past but not bad)
4) ending... it was, unfortunately, ok, your ending probably made a lot of readers say, "That was good." But you want them saying, "THAT WAS AMAZING!"
5) semi-random! I was dissapointed that there was no prom king and queen... it is very cliche for tthe main character to get it, but some one could have gotten it!
LOL, overall good though and I have enjoyed reading your story so much!
10/4/2008 c20 welcome to meganland
Wow i think i read this story at the exact perfect moment.
Haha, cuz u updated while i was reading xD
I would prefer...An epilogue.
Yeah i'll vote later, but i want to sya why here...
So yeah.
i want an epilogue because there's not really much you could probably do with a sequal. Well i bet you could but im guess it would have some cliche cheating thing...That is pretty much in any story you read now.
So yeah, thats kind of why :)
Thats the only cliche i dont like.
Oh, im kind of in love with cliches btw.
This story was so AMAZING!
I just completely loved it.
I couldnt think of one thing wrong.
I was a little worried about justin and the rapist guy(Wtf was his name again?)
I really wanted her to be with beau.
They are so CUTE together!
You did realy realy good character developement.
Which most authors kind of suck at.
Normally they do way too much or not enough.
So when something happens in the story im like "Thats OOC, and then i figure out its not)
I also liked how everyhting got in the way but it wasnt way too much drama.
I thought when u added justin it would be too many characters. But it wasnt, everything worked out!
I could write alot more, But i'll shut up.
Oh yeah, I love australia! I wanna go ther :)
Its actually kind of my dream to go to sydney, australia and walk on that bridgey thingy.
I live in the US, btw.
Okay, sry for booring you xD
i kind of have a rambling problem...
Wow i think i read this story at the exact perfect moment.
Haha, cuz u updated while i was reading xD
I would prefer...An epilogue.
Yeah i'll vote later, but i want to sya why here...
So yeah.
i want an epilogue because there's not really much you could probably do with a sequal. Well i bet you could but im guess it would have some cliche cheating thing...That is pretty much in any story you read now.
So yeah, thats kind of why :)
Thats the only cliche i dont like.
Oh, im kind of in love with cliches btw.
This story was so AMAZING!
I just completely loved it.
I couldnt think of one thing wrong.
I was a little worried about justin and the rapist guy(Wtf was his name again?)
I really wanted her to be with beau.
They are so CUTE together!
You did realy realy good character developement.
Which most authors kind of suck at.
Normally they do way too much or not enough.
So when something happens in the story im like "Thats OOC, and then i figure out its not)
I also liked how everyhting got in the way but it wasnt way too much drama.
I thought when u added justin it would be too many characters. But it wasnt, everything worked out!
I could write alot more, But i'll shut up.
Oh yeah, I love australia! I wanna go ther :)
Its actually kind of my dream to go to sydney, australia and walk on that bridgey thingy.
I live in the US, btw.
Okay, sry for booring you xD
i kind of have a rambling problem...
10/4/2008 c19 princessarielle3
OMG A SEQUEL A SEQUEL! YES I WANT TO SEE WHAT THERE LIKE WHEN THERE ACTUALLY A COUPLE ALL THERE CUTE FIGHTS :P
OMG A SEQUEL A SEQUEL! YES I WANT TO SEE WHAT THERE LIKE WHEN THERE ACTUALLY A COUPLE ALL THERE CUTE FIGHTS :P
10/3/2008 c19 16ValerieYoung
aw this is such a sweet chapter! i luv da song lyrics wat is da 2nd song called. im so happy tat anna n beau is 2gether! they r meant 2 b! well update soon! good luck on da rest of ur story!
16ValerieYoungaw this is such a sweet chapter! i luv da song lyrics wat is da 2nd song called. im so happy tat anna n beau is 2gether! they r meant 2 b! well update soon! good luck on da rest of ur story!