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13R.T.D.W
It was very... Interesting.
Don't take me wrong, I don't mean that in a bad way. I liked the feel of the writing, the way some things came back again and again, but not in an intrusively repetitive way (I.E. the fish whose name nobody could pronounce), and all in all it felt very nice and happy and close (Something that I've been in dire need of).
You have a very distinctive style, this is for sure, and I think that there's no need to change it. On another positive note, I didn't see any obvious grammar or spelling errors (Those that are generally one to three words long), so fundamentally it's good.
Anyways, thanks for giving me the courage to, ah, deal with the dishes.
Best of wishes,
-R.T.D.W.
13R.T.D.WIt was very... Interesting.
Don't take me wrong, I don't mean that in a bad way. I liked the feel of the writing, the way some things came back again and again, but not in an intrusively repetitive way (I.E. the fish whose name nobody could pronounce), and all in all it felt very nice and happy and close (Something that I've been in dire need of).
You have a very distinctive style, this is for sure, and I think that there's no need to change it. On another positive note, I didn't see any obvious grammar or spelling errors (Those that are generally one to three words long), so fundamentally it's good.
Anyways, thanks for giving me the courage to, ah, deal with the dishes.
Best of wishes,
-R.T.D.W.