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3/17/2009 c17 12henbee
LOL, I love the last line.

"There's no such thing as ghosts, dear."

Haha, Mason got all offended. Aww, don't worry Mason, we believe in vampires! ^^

Update soon, I love it.

Lol. Damsel in distress. Lucien and Eric! :p
3/15/2009 c17 2ishani acuinatum.ashley
cool...that part ws simply hilarious when lucien ws found having tea...man you really know how to build up a surprise...good work...will be waiting for your next chapter
3/13/2009 c16 7cajun-cuteness
LOL. We can't just get an apartment. It has to be haunted.

XD

LOL.

But don't kill off Lucien! I LIKE HIM!

Even though he's gay. And I'm a girl. I still think he sounds so SWEET!
3/13/2009 c15 cajun-cuteness
I can't decide if I'm happy or kinda disappointed...

XD

They would have made such a cute couple!

:((

But Mason and Belle are adorable too!

:DD
3/6/2009 c16 1chococcino
_ The apartment gave me goosebumps

...Wow, can't wait for the next chappie!

I wonder who or what is doing those things

T-T.. I feel sorry for Lucien and his china ornaments..
3/6/2009 c16 2ishani acuinatum.ashley
awesomw chapter...but don't you think it's a little too short?...well anyway i enjoyed it...do keep updating :D
2/27/2009 c1 5Somedaymydreamswillcome
I really like that the whole band has a different species. hahahah :)

Although I gotta admit Gary sounds better than Mason to me. :P :)
2/27/2009 c15 2ishani acuinatum.ashley
hey...do update it soon...can't wait to read more
2/27/2009 c15 12henbee
:o!

Whooa headrush.

Gary loves Belle, who loves Mason, but Mason now may love Belle but thinks she doesn't like him whilst Mimi loves Gary and Lucien obsesses over gender issues.

This needs an update.

Like, now.

Waverley so has to read this.
2/27/2009 c2 QueensofChaos
This story is interesting, but there are a few things that bug me about it.

Have you read "Twilight" by Stephanie Meyer?

If you have, are you trying to get yourself sued?

Yes, the plot is original and creative, so I'll give you that, but come on.

Main character's name is Belle (ripoff of Bella much?)

The guy, Mason, is increadibly gorgeous and just happens to be a vampire (Does the name Edward Cullen ring a bell?)

And don't even get me started on the title.

I'm not saying this to offend, merely stating facts.
2/26/2009 c15 1chococcino
NO! It just HAD to end like that T_T I want to read more!

Lol,

Great ending. HAHA, poor Belle. Poor Gary too.

Mason's creepy when he's angry!

Anyway keep up the awesome writing!

~choco~
2/21/2009 c1 3BitchMcGee
shouldn't this be on fanfiction?
2/20/2009 c13 2ishani acuinatum.ashley
awesome ...i m waiting for more...

good luck
1/24/2009 c13 11Naomi Chick
I love this chapter. I'm glad Bella is safe. Wow! Bella and Davina had a good conversation. Gilbert, seriously need some help.
1/23/2009 c13 1chococcino
Woohoo! Belle's safe!

but I wonder what Gilbert's gonna do for Plan B?

and whoa, Davina likes ...? SERIOUSLY?
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