for The Conglomeration of Bad Haikus4/26/2009 c10 
21Sercus Kaynine
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I love the cheerful voice of this poem because it makes me ready for adventure!
I didn't like the lack of imagery here though. It would've made the poem better.
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I love the cheerful voice of this poem because it makes me ready for adventure!
I didn't like the lack of imagery here though. It would've made the poem better.
4/26/2009 c9 Sercus Kaynine
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I like the foreboding mood here. It makes for great suspense.
I also like the message because it's a very true one.
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I like the foreboding mood here. It makes for great suspense.
I also like the message because it's a very true one.
4/26/2009 c8 Sercus Kaynine
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I liked the original idea here because I would've never thought of something so obvious!
I also like how you wrote a poem making fun of chat speak because it's every writer's bane.
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I liked the original idea here because I would've never thought of something so obvious!
I also like how you wrote a poem making fun of chat speak because it's every writer's bane.
4/26/2009 c7 Sercus Kaynine
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I love this cool idea because it sticks it to the man. :P
I also love the way this poem is organized; it's pretty funny.
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I love this cool idea because it sticks it to the man. :P
I also love the way this poem is organized; it's pretty funny.
4/26/2009 c6 Sercus Kaynine
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I love how you told us indirectly that you were allergic to cats without coming straight out and saying it. It was a pretty smart move.
I also liked how you compared cats to pepper on your nose because that's a very original and interesting metaphor.
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I love how you told us indirectly that you were allergic to cats without coming straight out and saying it. It was a pretty smart move.
I also liked how you compared cats to pepper on your nose because that's a very original and interesting metaphor.
4/26/2009 c5 Sercus Kaynine
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Haha, I love this idea because it's something I can personally relate to. I hate that formula.
I also liked that you were able to create such a fun haiku about math, of all things! Very clever of you.
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Haha, I love this idea because it's something I can personally relate to. I hate that formula.
I also liked that you were able to create such a fun haiku about math, of all things! Very clever of you.
4/26/2009 c4 Sercus Kaynine
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I love the voice of this poem because it reminds me of a little girl so much.
I also like the idea for this story because it's cute and innocent.
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I love the voice of this poem because it reminds me of a little girl so much.
I also like the idea for this story because it's cute and innocent.
4/26/2009 c3 Sercus Kaynine
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I like the idea of this poem because it's something everyone understands.
I also admire the desperation in the narrator's voice because it seems so real.
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I like the idea of this poem because it's something everyone understands.
I also admire the desperation in the narrator's voice because it seems so real.
4/26/2009 c2 Sercus Kaynine
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I like the humorous tone to this poem because it made me laugh.
I didn't like the word choice in this poem though because I think it could've been more creative.
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I like the humorous tone to this poem because it made me laugh.
I didn't like the word choice in this poem though because I think it could've been more creative.
4/26/2009 c1 Sercus Kaynine
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Ha! I liked the twenty-first century theme here. Very quirky.
I also liked the sneaky story in there. Very clever.
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Ha! I liked the twenty-first century theme here. Very quirky.
I also liked the sneaky story in there. Very clever.
4/23/2009 c8 5R. E. Ellison
Future generations will find logs of old texts and wonder what happened to reduce the human language to this. Were we conquered by math-based aliens or was it actually PLANNED?
Clever and subversive at the same time.
I have to admit I NEEDED the translation.
5R. E. EllisonFuture generations will find logs of old texts and wonder what happened to reduce the human language to this. Were we conquered by math-based aliens or was it actually PLANNED?
Clever and subversive at the same time.
I have to admit I NEEDED the translation.
4/23/2009 c5 R. E. Ellison
Id didn't see you in back watching me in my math class.
You MUST have been there.
this is WAY too accurate.
Id didn't see you in back watching me in my math class.
You MUST have been there.
this is WAY too accurate.
4/23/2009 c10 the shattered star
I love these! Quite humorous and... lyrical. Keep writing please! Bisous ~ the shattered star
I love these! Quite humorous and... lyrical. Keep writing please! Bisous ~ the shattered star