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6/14/2009 c10 23Amaury
Very clever and amusing. I like your talent.
4/26/2009 c10 21Sercus Kaynine
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I love the cheerful voice of this poem because it makes me ready for adventure!

I didn't like the lack of imagery here though. It would've made the poem better.
4/26/2009 c9 Sercus Kaynine
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I like the foreboding mood here. It makes for great suspense.

I also like the message because it's a very true one.
4/26/2009 c8 Sercus Kaynine
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I liked the original idea here because I would've never thought of something so obvious!

I also like how you wrote a poem making fun of chat speak because it's every writer's bane.
4/26/2009 c7 Sercus Kaynine
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I love this cool idea because it sticks it to the man. :P

I also love the way this poem is organized; it's pretty funny.
4/26/2009 c6 Sercus Kaynine
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I love how you told us indirectly that you were allergic to cats without coming straight out and saying it. It was a pretty smart move.

I also liked how you compared cats to pepper on your nose because that's a very original and interesting metaphor.
4/26/2009 c5 Sercus Kaynine
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Haha, I love this idea because it's something I can personally relate to. I hate that formula.

I also liked that you were able to create such a fun haiku about math, of all things! Very clever of you.
4/26/2009 c4 Sercus Kaynine
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I love the voice of this poem because it reminds me of a little girl so much.

I also like the idea for this story because it's cute and innocent.
4/26/2009 c3 Sercus Kaynine
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I like the idea of this poem because it's something everyone understands.

I also admire the desperation in the narrator's voice because it seems so real.
4/26/2009 c2 Sercus Kaynine
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I like the humorous tone to this poem because it made me laugh.

I didn't like the word choice in this poem though because I think it could've been more creative.
4/26/2009 c1 Sercus Kaynine
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Ha! I liked the twenty-first century theme here. Very quirky.

I also liked the sneaky story in there. Very clever.
4/23/2009 c8 5R. E. Ellison
Future generations will find logs of old texts and wonder what happened to reduce the human language to this. Were we conquered by math-based aliens or was it actually PLANNED?

Clever and subversive at the same time.

I have to admit I NEEDED the translation.
4/23/2009 c5 R. E. Ellison
Id didn't see you in back watching me in my math class.

You MUST have been there.

this is WAY too accurate.
4/23/2009 c1 R. E. Ellison
Just my cup of tea.
4/23/2009 c10 the shattered star
I love these! Quite humorous and... lyrical. Keep writing please! Bisous ~ the shattered star
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