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8/4/2008 c1 Killer Raptor
Awesome! This tops the whole peanut story in every way possible!

5/5
8/4/2008 c1 crimed
I thought it was ok, although some parts were a bit off. Like redundant words or phrases, mainly grammatical.There are also some spots that don't make sense, they just don't seem to fit, not sure how to show you where they are. It has a lot of potential to end up as a neat story.
8/3/2008 c1 2Great Thumbs of Wisdom
Goddangit, you nearly gave me a heartattack there. THAT WAS UNEXPECTED. OMG

Very, very awesome story. Your first one equalled "meh", your second one equalled "good", and this one equals "AWSHUM". So apparently you're getting better by leaps and bounds.

Quite good, quite good. I hope you do turn this into something else, but maybe don't make it a sequel... and more of just a sucessor, playing off the same idea but different. I guess. I'M GOING INSANE (seriously, the insides of me ears 're itching like crazy as I type this) TWO THUMBS UP

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