for Awakened Soul10/14/2008 c5 karen timothy
Thanks for another great update. I know there are going to be lots of problems for Raynah and Christian. If they hold strong they will be able to handle it together. Plaese update again soon,I really love this story.
Thanks for another great update. I know there are going to be lots of problems for Raynah and Christian. If they hold strong they will be able to handle it together. Plaese update again soon,I really love this story.
10/9/2008 c5 Booklover91
this was a good chpater but i have ONE suggestion, when transitioning between one person talikng to another, you should space it out because when it's so close together like it is now, it makes it kinda hard to tell who's saying what.
But besides that, I'm really enjoying the story and I'm glad you updated =]
this was a good chpater but i have ONE suggestion, when transitioning between one person talikng to another, you should space it out because when it's so close together like it is now, it makes it kinda hard to tell who's saying what.
But besides that, I'm really enjoying the story and I'm glad you updated =]
9/14/2008 c4 
1BettyBoo
I really like this story and intrigued to see if Ray and Cristian are going to make it when outside forces start butting in ;) Keep it up!
1BettyBooI really like this story and intrigued to see if Ray and Cristian are going to make it when outside forces start butting in ;) Keep it up!
9/8/2008 c4 karen timothy
Thank you for updating this lovely story.I'm glad that Raynah took the chance and went out with Christian. I can see this is the beginning of a beautiful couple.
Thank you for updating this lovely story.I'm glad that Raynah took the chance and went out with Christian. I can see this is the beginning of a beautiful couple.
8/24/2008 c4 Booklover91
this was a really great chapter, Raynah ans Cristian are so cute, aw :)
now I want boyfriend even more, lol
I cn't wai for an update (: *hint, hint* hehe
this was a really great chapter, Raynah ans Cristian are so cute, aw :)
now I want boyfriend even more, lol
I cn't wai for an update (: *hint, hint* hehe
8/24/2008 c4 mystic.fox
This is such a good story...I was late for work this morning. I'm not too fond of Jacob, he seems like the type of guy who will do anything to get what he wants and is too cocky/arrogant. I can't wait to see what happens next.
This is such a good story...I was late for work this morning. I'm not too fond of Jacob, he seems like the type of guy who will do anything to get what he wants and is too cocky/arrogant. I can't wait to see what happens next.
8/15/2008 c2 Booklover91
this story is very intriguing...i think i spelled that wrong, lol , oh well, you know what I mean :), I cna't wait for an update
this story is very intriguing...i think i spelled that wrong, lol , oh well, you know what I mean :), I cna't wait for an update
8/14/2008 c2 karen timothy
I'm loving this story. It's so different from what I usually read. Rich girl meets working boy. I'm eagerly waiting for an update. I was hoping you could match Lucas with Sophia. But I'm getting ahead of myself. Thanks for writing such a awonderful story with a different concept.
I'm loving this story. It's so different from what I usually read. Rich girl meets working boy. I'm eagerly waiting for an update. I was hoping you could match Lucas with Sophia. But I'm getting ahead of myself. Thanks for writing such a awonderful story with a different concept.
8/8/2008 c1 4S.K. Allen
I like the story so far. I like the context but...
I would consider updating the dates twenty to thirty years. The social class is unrealistic for a black family anywhere in the united states at that time... even if Harlem was the place to be in the black Renaissance era. She is too... white not by way of speach I think the speech patterns are all right and totally accurate. but They are too rich and there weren't that many people they could associate with that were that rich.
It totally interests me how an interracial couple would survive in that time though even up north so Keep writing. I may be totally off base, it just didn't seem likely.
4S.K. AllenI like the story so far. I like the context but...
I would consider updating the dates twenty to thirty years. The social class is unrealistic for a black family anywhere in the united states at that time... even if Harlem was the place to be in the black Renaissance era. She is too... white not by way of speach I think the speech patterns are all right and totally accurate. but They are too rich and there weren't that many people they could associate with that were that rich.
It totally interests me how an interracial couple would survive in that time though even up north so Keep writing. I may be totally off base, it just didn't seem likely.
8/8/2008 c1 EcentricEssense
I like it so far. It kind of reminds me of that movie Love Song but keep it up.
I like it so far. It kind of reminds me of that movie Love Song but keep it up.