for The Great Pretender9/19/2008 c1 
10LyricsArePoetry
I read this the other day but I forgot to review it...sorry about that.
It's really good.
I'm like that...I mean completely different situation, but when I'm out and about no-one could possibly knwo what's going on in my life...I jsut pretend it's all ok!
10LyricsArePoetryI read this the other day but I forgot to review it...sorry about that.
It's really good.
I'm like that...I mean completely different situation, but when I'm out and about no-one could possibly knwo what's going on in my life...I jsut pretend it's all ok!
8/4/2008 c1 9haveyouseenmyhaggis
That was really good! It was a really interesting story! *Hugs* Great work.
~Paula~
9haveyouseenmyhaggisThat was really good! It was a really interesting story! *Hugs* Great work.
~Paula~
8/4/2008 c1 11Alexis of Dreams
Hey there! I got a little confused at first coz the first few lines were repeated, but so far the introduction's good. It's great that you're keeping the readers in suspense. Update the story I wanna know what's happening. ^_^
11Alexis of DreamsHey there! I got a little confused at first coz the first few lines were repeated, but so far the introduction's good. It's great that you're keeping the readers in suspense. Update the story I wanna know what's happening. ^_^