for Commercials11/1/2008 c1 Green Eyed Angel
Yeah, I loved it, even though it was short. I'm so original, using my own words [sarcasm/]
Yeah, I loved it, even though it was short. I'm so original, using my own words [sarcasm/]
10/9/2008 c1 
1JoiZ. D
-grins- That was really funny! And cute! I just realized that this one shot didn't have any names for the characters... wow...
I enjoyed it a lot! Good job!
1JoiZ. D-grins- That was really funny! And cute! I just realized that this one shot didn't have any names for the characters... wow...
I enjoyed it a lot! Good job!
9/30/2008 c1 3if.i.had.1.wish
Hey girl! Guess who? No really, guess. Lol oh my gosh your story is so cute! I love it! I haven't read any of your stories in ages, but I haven't really had any spare time what with all this Year 11 work. I mean, last year was so not like this! I just finished my ICT coursework aswell lol. Anywhoozles, I'm getting sorta side-tracked... I love one-shots, specially romantic ones. Great story :).. (adds you to favourites then looks for more of your stuffs to read) Chica :P Xx
3if.i.had.1.wishHey girl! Guess who? No really, guess. Lol oh my gosh your story is so cute! I love it! I haven't read any of your stories in ages, but I haven't really had any spare time what with all this Year 11 work. I mean, last year was so not like this! I just finished my ICT coursework aswell lol. Anywhoozles, I'm getting sorta side-tracked... I love one-shots, specially romantic ones. Great story :).. (adds you to favourites then looks for more of your stuffs to read) Chica :P Xx
9/13/2008 c1 1Maybreakmyheart
I really like this little story...It was simplistic and just...refreshing I guess. Like I mean it wasn't really really deep but somethings in life just aren't and thats what writing is all about; being realistic. Good job, very cute.
1MaybreakmyheartI really like this little story...It was simplistic and just...refreshing I guess. Like I mean it wasn't really really deep but somethings in life just aren't and thats what writing is all about; being realistic. Good job, very cute.
8/15/2008 c1 Tiger-Sparks
Aww! That was so sweet! I'm not sure, but maybe you shouldn't put the whole ending in the summery. I know you don't have all the details in it, but the reader knows your gonna have her kiss him back in the end anyways, so...maybe you should just say the part where he kisses her in the summery, and maybe a hint that she might kiss him back? I don't know xP
But yeah, this was really sweet! (: And I liked how you didn't give their names. I'm not sure why. I just liked it xP
-Katie
Aww! That was so sweet! I'm not sure, but maybe you shouldn't put the whole ending in the summery. I know you don't have all the details in it, but the reader knows your gonna have her kiss him back in the end anyways, so...maybe you should just say the part where he kisses her in the summery, and maybe a hint that she might kiss him back? I don't know xP
But yeah, this was really sweet! (: And I liked how you didn't give their names. I'm not sure why. I just liked it xP
-Katie
8/4/2008 c1 7choirluvr
That is SO sweet! Aw... your a good writer. When I read this I could picture everything crystal clear in my head. Look foward to reading more :)
7choirluvrThat is SO sweet! Aw... your a good writer. When I read this I could picture everything crystal clear in my head. Look foward to reading more :)
8/4/2008 c1 19toffeecakesxox
-squee!- This is so AWESOMELY INCREDIBLE! The cuteness, the cliche-ness, so awesomely squee-worthy!
Your cliche-loving, oh-so-the-same-as-you friend,
Strawberry ^^
19toffeecakesxox-squee!- This is so AWESOMELY INCREDIBLE! The cuteness, the cliche-ness, so awesomely squee-worthy!
Your cliche-loving, oh-so-the-same-as-you friend,
Strawberry ^^