
10/7/2016 c1 Favorite Reader
Hi! I just wanted to say, I first started reading your stories in 2007, and all night tonight I was searching for your stories to re-read. They're absolutely unforgettable and amazing! Your writing has impacted me greatly, it's truly beautiful. Thank you so much! Keep writing! XOXO
Hi! I just wanted to say, I first started reading your stories in 2007, and all night tonight I was searching for your stories to re-read. They're absolutely unforgettable and amazing! Your writing has impacted me greatly, it's truly beautiful. Thank you so much! Keep writing! XOXO
4/30/2016 c3
1MoonLitRandomner
Thank you for leaving the first two chapters posted and then a notice of the moving and updating, it's such a good story and now I've taken a shine to the new site.

Thank you for leaving the first two chapters posted and then a notice of the moving and updating, it's such a good story and now I've taken a shine to the new site.
1/4/2016 c51 Guest
Most enjoyable. Sad sometimes but very interesting and thank goodness for a change a story that you can read to the very end. All the previous stories stopped halfway through and I never knew how they ended. This was exceptional.
Most enjoyable. Sad sometimes but very interesting and thank goodness for a change a story that you can read to the very end. All the previous stories stopped halfway through and I never knew how they ended. This was exceptional.
11/26/2015 c56 Daniel Clausen
You call "56 of The Rising Sun and 57 of Bright Star" long? Try and read my FF story it's even longer than your story
You call "56 of The Rising Sun and 57 of Bright Star" long? Try and read my FF story it's even longer than your story
10/14/2015 c22 geeyeahyeah
I am loving this story! I squeeeee'd at this chapter! Their romance development was perfect for me. The anger that had been boiling within, with so much compassion for each other just really put the cherry on top for this chapter. Its 4 In the morning and its so hard to put this story down !
I am loving this story! I squeeeee'd at this chapter! Their romance development was perfect for me. The anger that had been boiling within, with so much compassion for each other just really put the cherry on top for this chapter. Its 4 In the morning and its so hard to put this story down !
10/13/2015 c56 Lady Bitter Maiden
Congrats on getting published. I imagine it fells liking your stories in FanFiction ana Fanfiction press (not that I have a story here lol). I'll be sure to tell my other brother about it. He's the one who showed my Inhertance Cycle and he has read (at least startes to read a book I got him) so he may look at it at least.
Congrats on getting published. I imagine it fells liking your stories in FanFiction ana Fanfiction press (not that I have a story here lol). I'll be sure to tell my other brother about it. He's the one who showed my Inhertance Cycle and he has read (at least startes to read a book I got him) so he may look at it at least.
10/13/2015 c54 Lady Bitter Maiden
It was awesome. The whole thing with Ater reminded me of a shade, by the way. I can't wait to read the sequel and then I'm going to reread the Inheritance Cycle (which means getting mu books out of my brother's room :-( not going to be fun)
It was awesome. The whole thing with Ater reminded me of a shade, by the way. I can't wait to read the sequel and then I'm going to reread the Inheritance Cycle (which means getting mu books out of my brother's room :-( not going to be fun)
10/13/2015 c42 Lady Bitter Maiden
Just as note, though I'm sure it's been pointed out, when they're leaving the city, you said Isprea (I apologise if that's spelt wrong) went to the dwarfven city, but later in the story Isprea is in the company.
Just as note, though I'm sure it's been pointed out, when they're leaving the city, you said Isprea (I apologise if that's spelt wrong) went to the dwarfven city, but later in the story Isprea is in the company.
10/10/2015 c5 Lady Bitter Maiden
This is really great story. It reminds me a lot of the Inheritance Cycle.
This is really great story. It reminds me a lot of the Inheritance Cycle.
10/9/2015 c56
3Marielle Chang
No offense but this story reminds me too much of Eragon. The Riders, the crystalline dome that surrounds the dead soldiers...all of it is too much like Eragon.

No offense but this story reminds me too much of Eragon. The Riders, the crystalline dome that surrounds the dead soldiers...all of it is too much like Eragon.
7/1/2015 c54
3akiraneesama
What a tearful story. It breaks my heart to close this book. I will miss Eliana and Caelum. They're so cute and very sweet to each other. A really wonderful story.

What a tearful story. It breaks my heart to close this book. I will miss Eliana and Caelum. They're so cute and very sweet to each other. A really wonderful story.
6/22/2015 c55
1WatUCWatIC
that was perfect. I must admit, I prefer eliana and orien's love to her and caelum's any day, though that romance was certainly a nice and entertaing (sub)plot. welp, too bad thats over. what do I do now? sleep? yea, okay, reading this for a 2 days straight was irresponsible, fine, ill slee. bluh, 11/10

that was perfect. I must admit, I prefer eliana and orien's love to her and caelum's any day, though that romance was certainly a nice and entertaing (sub)plot. welp, too bad thats over. what do I do now? sleep? yea, okay, reading this for a 2 days straight was irresponsible, fine, ill slee. bluh, 11/10