for He Stole, She Stole2/9/2009 c1 
5lickembrains
AWW! :3 Clinton wins the stealing contest. Hahaha.
love love LOVE this story. Can't wait for more of your writing. (your style is just SO FUN
5lickembrainsAWW! :3 Clinton wins the stealing contest. Hahaha.
love love LOVE this story. Can't wait for more of your writing. (your style is just SO FUN
1/16/2009 c1 GGGGGGG
you realy can make different...ish story
i don't know why but everyone is useing that you stole my heart thing well everone meaning (you and pinkamoo and poosobly others)
P.S i am unhappy to say that your story is good :(
you realy can make different...ish story
i don't know why but everyone is useing that you stole my heart thing well everone meaning (you and pinkamoo and poosobly others)
P.S i am unhappy to say that your story is good :(
12/26/2008 c1 1Katie Saychiadu
I like this and although sometimes oneshots should be exactly that... one shots, this story wasn't one of them. The bones of this piece would make a really good novel and the two quick witted main characters would be fantastic to get to know even better.
Really, you did your awesome characters here a disservice by leaving this so... simple!
The only person I didn't like was Casey, but she was necessary ;)
Great idea, I just wish it was longer :)
Katie
1Katie SaychiaduI like this and although sometimes oneshots should be exactly that... one shots, this story wasn't one of them. The bones of this piece would make a really good novel and the two quick witted main characters would be fantastic to get to know even better.
Really, you did your awesome characters here a disservice by leaving this so... simple!
The only person I didn't like was Casey, but she was necessary ;)
Great idea, I just wish it was longer :)
Katie
12/21/2008 c1 DLETE THIS OLD
i got a laugh over this, so you're not that crazy...or you're just plain funny :) i like your vocabulary: sleep-arounder...so much better sounding than any of those other words hmm i should start using it :D thanks for the idea!
i got a laugh over this, so you're not that crazy...or you're just plain funny :) i like your vocabulary: sleep-arounder...so much better sounding than any of those other words hmm i should start using it :D thanks for the idea!
12/5/2008 c1 4GrannyP
Haha! That was a great story! I love how it went back and forth with them stealing each others things, and then he didn't even know that she'd "stolen" the umbrella. That was great! It definitely made me giggle quite a big.
One big thing that did kind of stand out to me was... well, you're not American, are you? I mean, it doesn't really matter, but this took place in New York, and there were quite a few things I picked up that wouldn't be typically found in American English (e.g., till, mum, "smart looking"). No biggie, of course because I loved reading this anyway! But that WOULD be something I would pick up, with my crazy love for accents and dialects and such.
Now... where can I find a cute lawyer? Any recommendations?
4GrannyPHaha! That was a great story! I love how it went back and forth with them stealing each others things, and then he didn't even know that she'd "stolen" the umbrella. That was great! It definitely made me giggle quite a big.
One big thing that did kind of stand out to me was... well, you're not American, are you? I mean, it doesn't really matter, but this took place in New York, and there were quite a few things I picked up that wouldn't be typically found in American English (e.g., till, mum, "smart looking"). No biggie, of course because I loved reading this anyway! But that WOULD be something I would pick up, with my crazy love for accents and dialects and such.
Now... where can I find a cute lawyer? Any recommendations?
11/28/2008 c1 2CrossMyHeart
Those three words were key words to use in New York City, New Yoek(York).
“Photographic memory comes in handy at times,” I replied shruggina
(shrugging)
i love your stories so much! Im a sucker for a happy ending!
XxCrossMyHeartxX
2CrossMyHeartThose three words were key words to use in New York City, New Yoek(York).
“Photographic memory comes in handy at times,” I replied shruggina
(shrugging)
i love your stories so much! Im a sucker for a happy ending!
XxCrossMyHeartxX
10/31/2008 c1 Green Eyed Angel
well, that was nice, in a wierd sort of way. Should have been longer though.
well, that was nice, in a wierd sort of way. Should have been longer though.
10/29/2008 c1 Hakusa
Haha, hello again. Yeah, it's quite long. :3
It was quite enjoyable, and yeah, still hilarious like the one which I read before, "I Miss Your Head", hehe.
Oh, and I wonder how hot the Jerkoff/monkey-boy/Gods-gift/line-stealer/cab-stealer lawyer is, heh. (Had to copy + paste it, don't have a photographic memory, heh)
So, yeah, it was very enjoyable, though it would also be nice if the date could be more detailed. But it's fine just the way it is. Keep up the good work!
Adding you to favourites, btw, hehe.
DM
Haha, hello again. Yeah, it's quite long. :3
It was quite enjoyable, and yeah, still hilarious like the one which I read before, "I Miss Your Head", hehe.
Oh, and I wonder how hot the Jerkoff/monkey-boy/Gods-gift/line-stealer/cab-stealer lawyer is, heh. (Had to copy + paste it, don't have a photographic memory, heh)
So, yeah, it was very enjoyable, though it would also be nice if the date could be more detailed. But it's fine just the way it is. Keep up the good work!
Adding you to favourites, btw, hehe.
DM