for He Stole, She Stole10/24/2008 c1 
5I Murder on Impulse
AW...Haha, That is one of the sweetest stories i have ever read!
Good job gurl
xx
5I Murder on ImpulseAW...Haha, That is one of the sweetest stories i have ever read!
Good job gurl
xx
10/9/2008 c1 1JoiZ. D
Hey! This one shot isn't nonsense! It's brilliant! It's awesome! It's the next Mona Lisa! Ahahahaha... I know, the wrong comparision. Sorry. :P
This is one of the best one shots I've ever read! Great job!
1JoiZ. DHey! This one shot isn't nonsense! It's brilliant! It's awesome! It's the next Mona Lisa! Ahahahaha... I know, the wrong comparision. Sorry. :P
This is one of the best one shots I've ever read! Great job!
10/7/2008 c1 7Serafina Claremond
that was really good. your an awesome writer! i love your short stories, don't let this talent go to waste. :] plus, check out my story. [a little advertising never hurt anyone... jk]
7Serafina Claremondthat was really good. your an awesome writer! i love your short stories, don't let this talent go to waste. :] plus, check out my story. [a little advertising never hurt anyone... jk]
9/24/2008 c1 1Hateful Loving
hehehe i jsut read that and i have to say that is the cutest thing ever! Real good job on the writing! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg
1Hateful Lovinghehehe i jsut read that and i have to say that is the cutest thing ever! Real good job on the writing! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg
9/16/2008 c1 vavavoom
yaay. That was very entertaining. Pretty funny too. Lawyer = stealer. Ironic much? haha. Well, keep it up.
yaay. That was very entertaining. Pretty funny too. Lawyer = stealer. Ironic much? haha. Well, keep it up.
8/18/2008 c1 9Lily Llynn
Erm: "It was a could thing ‘pay’ had a brother named ‘money’ and a sister named ‘dollar(s)’." I'm not quite sure what you mean here. Is "could" supposed to be another word?
There's another awkward line somewhere too, and of course the spasticness is kinda annoying, but it was an entertaining and fluffy oneshot. (: I'm glad artistic dreamer added it to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnErm: "It was a could thing ‘pay’ had a brother named ‘money’ and a sister named ‘dollar(s)’." I'm not quite sure what you mean here. Is "could" supposed to be another word?
There's another awkward line somewhere too, and of course the spasticness is kinda annoying, but it was an entertaining and fluffy oneshot. (: I'm glad artistic dreamer added it to our c2. (:
8/15/2008 c1 Tiger-Sparks
Oh my gosh, that ending was so sweet! I almost squealed! And I'm not that type of girl xP
I have to say, my fav bit was "We all knew she was going to get married to him, Joseph Williamson being the ‘him’. My parents knew it, her parents knew it, his parents knew it, our friends knew it, our family (extended, duh!) knew it, heck even our teachers knew. (A lot of people knew it, can’t you tell?)" It was funny xP Gah, why do I love it when the guy and girl are either enemies, can't stand each other, tease each other, or do what these guys did so much! xP
I love these onshots of yours. Superdy duperdy awesome! XD
-Katie
Oh my gosh, that ending was so sweet! I almost squealed! And I'm not that type of girl xP
I have to say, my fav bit was "We all knew she was going to get married to him, Joseph Williamson being the ‘him’. My parents knew it, her parents knew it, his parents knew it, our friends knew it, our family (extended, duh!) knew it, heck even our teachers knew. (A lot of people knew it, can’t you tell?)" It was funny xP Gah, why do I love it when the guy and girl are either enemies, can't stand each other, tease each other, or do what these guys did so much! xP
I love these onshots of yours. Superdy duperdy awesome! XD
-Katie
8/12/2008 c1 1Imparfait Pourtant Parfait
Your story is really cute. The idea is really good and the plot is also very good. It's just that once or twice it got a bit confusing, such as the point where the narrator is explaining Casey's situation with being pregnant.
Overall, your story was excellent though. I especially liked the part at the end where he tells her he stole her heart. :P
1Imparfait Pourtant ParfaitYour story is really cute. The idea is really good and the plot is also very good. It's just that once or twice it got a bit confusing, such as the point where the narrator is explaining Casey's situation with being pregnant.
Overall, your story was excellent though. I especially liked the part at the end where he tells her he stole her heart. :P