
8/12/2008 c1
3Katie Valentine
awh, its uber cute! and i had a laugh reading it! :DD the name clinton sure reminds me of someone in my past, lol. anywho, he sounds hot! damn. *okay cant let my boyfriend see this, or he'll go -_- on me, hehee* keep up the good work girl! ^^V

awh, its uber cute! and i had a laugh reading it! :DD the name clinton sure reminds me of someone in my past, lol. anywho, he sounds hot! damn. *okay cant let my boyfriend see this, or he'll go -_- on me, hehee* keep up the good work girl! ^^V
8/12/2008 c1
5Camelia Sinensis
So funny & sweet. Just adorable (or another adjective if you don't like this one, i'd understand, this is a bit three-year-oldish)
Cheers!

So funny & sweet. Just adorable (or another adjective if you don't like this one, i'd understand, this is a bit three-year-oldish)
Cheers!
8/11/2008 c1
28woodstock1969
Aw, that was so cute! You say this came from a dream? Dang, I wish my dreams were that nice! Mine are very vivid, but usually just weird. Last night's had to do with a former crush of mine, me going running, my iPod malfunctioning, me being late to pick up my best friend from something, and herbal tea in a thermos. It's very complicated when you string it together, haha. Anyway, I loved this! Great job!

Aw, that was so cute! You say this came from a dream? Dang, I wish my dreams were that nice! Mine are very vivid, but usually just weird. Last night's had to do with a former crush of mine, me going running, my iPod malfunctioning, me being late to pick up my best friend from something, and herbal tea in a thermos. It's very complicated when you string it together, haha. Anyway, I loved this! Great job!
8/9/2008 c1 xLittleBlackConverse
So cute =) I loved it! It was easy-going, fun and witty. Original too. And I'm dating a lawyer too! Well, he's going to be one anyway =) Haha xx
So cute =) I loved it! It was easy-going, fun and witty. Original too. And I'm dating a lawyer too! Well, he's going to be one anyway =) Haha xx
8/6/2008 c1
19toffeecakesxox
So cute! :D I loved it! The LAST line-paragraph-thing was just AWESOME!
Strawberry ^^

So cute! :D I loved it! The LAST line-paragraph-thing was just AWESOME!
Strawberry ^^
8/6/2008 c1 ImaginarySuperstar
This is an amusing story. Good job! There were a couple of minor typos/errors, but the story still flowed alright.
I thought this part was great:
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“Well I’m sorry I came!”
“Well are you?” I demanded.
“No!” he shouted before pulling my face towards his and once again slamming his lips onto mine.
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And the ending was cute.
Keep up the good work! :D
This is an amusing story. Good job! There were a couple of minor typos/errors, but the story still flowed alright.
I thought this part was great:
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“Well I’m sorry I came!”
“Well are you?” I demanded.
“No!” he shouted before pulling my face towards his and once again slamming his lips onto mine.
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And the ending was cute.
Keep up the good work! :D