for Childish8/19/2008 c1 alwaysthereforyou
i like it. sometimes poetry is for ranting and is a great way to realease and show others powerful emotions. well done keep it up.
~peace
i like it. sometimes poetry is for ranting and is a great way to realease and show others powerful emotions. well done keep it up.
~peace
8/18/2008 c1 
17daughterofmusic
LOVED it. Just how I feel when I get angry at someone, especially if it's someone I know I shouldn't be mad at.
Keep writing! :)
Always here to review...
~Music
17daughterofmusicLOVED it. Just how I feel when I get angry at someone, especially if it's someone I know I shouldn't be mad at.
Keep writing! :)
Always here to review...
~Music
8/7/2008 c1 Bonnie
I really like how all the lines are clipped short and sharp. I can almost feel you clenching your teeth and glaring. So good poem, although I am sorry that you are so angry.
I really like how all the lines are clipped short and sharp. I can almost feel you clenching your teeth and glaring. So good poem, although I am sorry that you are so angry.