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8/19/2008 c1 alwaysthereforyou
i like it. sometimes poetry is for ranting and is a great way to realease and show others powerful emotions. well done keep it up.

8/18/2008 c1 17daughterofmusic
LOVED it. Just how I feel when I get angry at someone, especially if it's someone I know I shouldn't be mad at.

Keep writing! :)

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8/7/2008 c1 Bonnie
I really like how all the lines are clipped short and sharp. I can almost feel you clenching your teeth and glaring. So good poem, although I am sorry that you are so angry.
8/7/2008 c1 8Forgotten Legend
yep i like it

its simple and the message is clear

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