10/23/2019 c1 Guest
Hilarious! Loved it!
Hilarious! Loved it!
4/20/2015 c1 guest
That s a true short story, keep you craving for more..
That s a true short story, keep you craving for more..
3/9/2014 c1 DragonOwl
I love this so much! You've turned a simple idea into something beautiful and thoughtful - I really enjoyed reading it!
I love this so much! You've turned a simple idea into something beautiful and thoughtful - I really enjoyed reading it!
2/28/2011 c1 LivinLyfe2TheFullest
this is a good story, but it seems like it just cuts of at the end :(
hope you update all of ur stories soon (:
this is a good story, but it seems like it just cuts of at the end :(
hope you update all of ur stories soon (:
12/24/2010 c1 Fluffness
I love the characters! They're so different than most and completely realistic! It's so well-written. I love it. Thanks for the one-shot!
I love the characters! They're so different than most and completely realistic! It's so well-written. I love it. Thanks for the one-shot!
10/11/2010 c1 6domoholic
This was really good. I love how you portrayed their relationship. He doesn't need to say much for her to understand. Their relationship is unique and...well, awesome. I loved it!
This was really good. I love how you portrayed their relationship. He doesn't need to say much for her to understand. Their relationship is unique and...well, awesome. I loved it!
9/22/2010 c1 1anette95
Girl, you have serious talent. This is awesome and so well-written. I loved the fact neither of their names are mentioned, and his silence and her...what's the word again? oh yeah, "loquaciousness". I had to look that up in the dictionary.
This story is really one of a kind, and is really amazing. The plot is so cool!
The only thing I would change is the name. "Rainy Days" sounds better to me. :) But, it's your story and it's just a thought.
Girl, you have serious talent. This is awesome and so well-written. I loved the fact neither of their names are mentioned, and his silence and her...what's the word again? oh yeah, "loquaciousness". I had to look that up in the dictionary.
This story is really one of a kind, and is really amazing. The plot is so cool!
The only thing I would change is the name. "Rainy Days" sounds better to me. :) But, it's your story and it's just a thought.
8/10/2010 c1 12Lissya
very cute :) actually, the beginning reminded me of another story but the two ending are quite different and both enjoyable
very cute :) actually, the beginning reminded me of another story but the two ending are quite different and both enjoyable
8/5/2010 c1 ren-nyy
i like your style of writing for this one. and the whole idea of it was very creative. you're a great writer. i love the way you come up with different characters, and they're all so charming and quirky and fun. and lovable. so thank you for that.
this was a very great story :D
(and could you possibly update "On Being Carly"? Because i just finished reading yesterday, and its like, been on my mind all day and night. :D lol, update soon! :D)
i like your style of writing for this one. and the whole idea of it was very creative. you're a great writer. i love the way you come up with different characters, and they're all so charming and quirky and fun. and lovable. so thank you for that.
this was a very great story :D
(and could you possibly update "On Being Carly"? Because i just finished reading yesterday, and its like, been on my mind all day and night. :D lol, update soon! :D)
7/25/2010 c1 Junnin
It's so fluffy! especially the part where you wrote "he was smiling triumphantly "...:)
It's so fluffy! especially the part where you wrote "he was smiling triumphantly "...:)