
4/6/2010 c21 mitra
i have been reading a lot of stories lately and i think its one of the best stories so far.. keep it up.. great work!
i have been reading a lot of stories lately and i think its one of the best stories so far.. keep it up.. great work!
4/4/2010 c11
3TrixieBell
HA! this story is delicious... can a story be delicious? oh well.
kevin lee is heavenly... kevinlee heavenly... I MADE A RHYME! im so proud of myself. :)
anyway, i love the story! you are a genius. a very funny genius..most genius's arent funny so... kudos to you! ^_^
mmhmm...upload soon please! and i'll give you a cyber cookie.
~Trixie Bell

HA! this story is delicious... can a story be delicious? oh well.
kevin lee is heavenly... kevinlee heavenly... I MADE A RHYME! im so proud of myself. :)
anyway, i love the story! you are a genius. a very funny genius..most genius's arent funny so... kudos to you! ^_^
mmhmm...upload soon please! and i'll give you a cyber cookie.
~Trixie Bell
4/1/2010 c21
3ryse
nya.
ending could've been written better.
I don't think Kevin is .. cold enough.
Jessica annoyed me half the time.
But...
I finished reading the story.
Define that as you will.

nya.
ending could've been written better.
I don't think Kevin is .. cold enough.
Jessica annoyed me half the time.
But...
I finished reading the story.
Define that as you will.
4/1/2010 c21
14Sapphyre Nymph
i didnt really like the ending..
it seemed as if you had so much ready for the big BANG!
and then, it was a bit.. so-so...
but i really loved the story..
:)

i didnt really like the ending..
it seemed as if you had so much ready for the big BANG!
and then, it was a bit.. so-so...
but i really loved the story..
:)
3/25/2010 c21 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
i love this story from start to finish
:D
soo brilliantly amazing
thanksfor making my day :D
i love this story from start to finish
:D
soo brilliantly amazing
thanksfor making my day :D
3/22/2010 c21 applenica
hi! i'm your new reader.
i love your story very much. jessica is so funny, clumsy and bubble tea addict. kevin is so sneaky, why he always so smart pop out of knowhere like a geanie. i like the happy ending. i hope you can write the sequel ^^
hi! i'm your new reader.
i love your story very much. jessica is so funny, clumsy and bubble tea addict. kevin is so sneaky, why he always so smart pop out of knowhere like a geanie. i like the happy ending. i hope you can write the sequel ^^
3/21/2010 c11
1Candescence
Aw...Kevin was so sweet in this chapter. But Im not feeling good with Jess mingling with Mafia people. I think it's really stupid of her to do that, but I guess it's just her personality.

Aw...Kevin was so sweet in this chapter. But Im not feeling good with Jess mingling with Mafia people. I think it's really stupid of her to do that, but I guess it's just her personality.
3/17/2010 c19 Aradia Cloud
Kevin you little friggin prick. O my GOD. He shot her; he freaking shot her. I'm gonna kill him. No, really, I will.
Kevin you little friggin prick. O my GOD. He shot her; he freaking shot her. I'm gonna kill him. No, really, I will.