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5/21/2014 c20 1BooksInInk
I really did love this story, but when she got pregnant, it was a bit of a disappointment. I really dislike it when the main girl is pregnant. Other than that, the story was absolutely amazing! You writing style is very good, and I totally fell in love with Kevin! 3
3/5/2014 c21 1Varjo
X_X Omg... I love this story so much!
2/17/2014 c3 Wickedforlife
A mafia boss named kevin lee? Really? And do you know how common that name is? In 5th grade we had Kevin Lees in the same classroom.
2/3/2014 c21 23chimerica
I loved this story. Now to stalk your profile and hope you've written spin-offs featuring some of the other characters, like Logan or Ben! :)
2/3/2014 c16 chimerica
Honestly, I love Logan. He justs becomes more and more lovable with every chapter. But he definitely isn't right for our bubble tea fanatic. Nope, Logan is more suited for Rita. :)
1/2/2014 c21 Guest
Is Kevin Lee an actual person? Or is he just a fictional character? Someone please answer!

Also, near the ending (chapters 19-20), does Kevin shoot Jess and then shoot Sean Kenza, while he's in shock? Does Sean Kenza or Ben Kenza die? (In Chapter 21 Jessica says "...Does Ben Kenza want revenge?...", meaning he's still alive, but you don't actually explain.

Despite these little confusing parts for me, I still loved reading this story and think you are an amazing writer. The way your writing flows is just magnificent and I'll be sure to check some of your other stories. Keep up the great work!
12/29/2013 c21 1Belly boo1099
no offence but yeah your right not my favourite ending but good none the less. I quite loved reading this story, i had trouble putting it down. the necklace rule was pretty cool and creative! Also i was wandering if they was going to make a sequel (i doubt it but...) you know about their married life and the baby and such. but anyway lovely story, keep on writting!
12/21/2013 c21 Eliza
This had me bawling tears.
The plot is A. I love the way you write the characters, revealing them through their personalities and humorous banter. Yet, you still kept the drama! Overall one of my favorite stories. I wish you wrote a sequel!
10/18/2013 c21 Nothing But A Dreamer
All the feels... MY Heart is beating like crazy... This story is so good. I thoroughly enjoyed it.. I LOVE YOU AUTHOR!
7/10/2013 c5 yep
oh my how long is Jessica going to lock herself in Kevin's house? doesn't she have her mother and her job to worry about?
7/10/2013 c4 yep
so funny I love Jessica and Kevin LEE... is he Korean? mixed with white maybe?
7/8/2013 c21 2SkyBlue1309
Absolutely loved this story. S funny I was laughing constantly n I loved ur characterization. Amazing :) well done
6/10/2013 c1 Anna
How did he know her name?
5/9/2013 c21 Guest
Whoa, this ending really SUCKS.

Worst ending in the history of story endings. Wow...
5/9/2013 c21 Guest
This story was like a dramatic soap opera with an extremely unrealistic plotline.

The writing style is incredibly childish and the characters are overly naive and cliche. Overall a waste of time to read and soooo incredibly overdone that it's comparable to...daytime television! (Oh, the horror, right?)

You're not a totally sucky writer, but you could definitely use some improvement.
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