
9/9/2011 c21 Rosedreamer101
LMAO ! I love jessica's personality ! and kevin 3 goosh, they're so cute . i loved jessica's response to his proposal :D thats right jess ! you tell him ! XD but im sure he will ask her to marry him, quite romantically, and she'd probably agree 333 but wait- so the people werent planning to kill kevin? and that was just a plan to get jess back? O.o clever...LOL
LMAO ! I love jessica's personality ! and kevin 3 goosh, they're so cute . i loved jessica's response to his proposal :D thats right jess ! you tell him ! XD but im sure he will ask her to marry him, quite romantically, and she'd probably agree 333 but wait- so the people werent planning to kill kevin? and that was just a plan to get jess back? O.o clever...LOL
8/21/2011 c21 NicerTwin
EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! fav quote from this chapter: "Logan smiled in what he thought was a reassuring manner. He obviously never tried it out in front of a mirror, because he looked like a rabid beaver."
EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! fav quote from this chapter: "Logan smiled in what he thought was a reassuring manner. He obviously never tried it out in front of a mirror, because he looked like a rabid beaver."
8/18/2011 c21 friarhmn
Ahh this story is so freakin amazing! Lol Jess cracks me up, I love her personality :)
Anyways, loved the story.. It's definitely one of my favs! I love how it's not cliche like other stories 3
Ahh this story is so freakin amazing! Lol Jess cracks me up, I love her personality :)
Anyways, loved the story.. It's definitely one of my favs! I love how it's not cliche like other stories 3
7/23/2011 c21 namesdontmatter
This was one of the best stories i've ever read. I loved its fast pace and how it was never predictable. Your writing is amazing!
This was one of the best stories i've ever read. I loved its fast pace and how it was never predictable. Your writing is amazing!
7/13/2011 c21 Anna
loved it!
loved it!
4/30/2011 c21
2MuffinsRoxSox
This made me all emotional. I'm sure my nose is all red and gross and so is the rest of me face. Crying tends to do that, I've heard. This was so cute. And sad. And sweet. I need a tissue. Seeya. :)

This made me all emotional. I'm sure my nose is all red and gross and so is the rest of me face. Crying tends to do that, I've heard. This was so cute. And sad. And sweet. I need a tissue. Seeya. :)
4/25/2011 c21 Jae
Second time rereading this. Still think its awesome. I love how it doesn't have draggy parts. Love how its not as predictable as most stories, really had my heart caught when he shot her! o.o (yes even though I've already read it b4 .) Love how he goes nearly crazy after he sees her with Ryan and is willing to do anything to keep her safe, even dissolving the mafia and shooting her... love how his character develops beautifully (not too fast randomly falling for her, and not too slowly) and is believable. He's so sweet and I love how she falls for him as well. (:
Second time rereading this. Still think its awesome. I love how it doesn't have draggy parts. Love how its not as predictable as most stories, really had my heart caught when he shot her! o.o (yes even though I've already read it b4 .) Love how he goes nearly crazy after he sees her with Ryan and is willing to do anything to keep her safe, even dissolving the mafia and shooting her... love how his character develops beautifully (not too fast randomly falling for her, and not too slowly) and is believable. He's so sweet and I love how she falls for him as well. (:
4/15/2011 c17 DofD
Thank God. If he married her I was going to jump inside this story and bitch slap his fine fictional self.
Thank God. If he married her I was going to jump inside this story and bitch slap his fine fictional self.