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3/23/2010 c1 33FLIPPER66
1/2/2010 c1 10CassandraStacy
This was cute . . . how we got to see glimpses of them together as they grew up. I think my favorite line was: "if you had read the last page it would have told you what I was going to do and that would spoil the ending for you." I thought it was pretty smooth.

9/11/2008 c1 2Slightly Spazztic
This is the other part to the other story, huh?

I like it.

8/12/2008 c1 24Ravina
Umm...so I reviewed "Phone Calls" yesterday and said that it's probably my favourite out of all your stories on FictionPress...now I will change my mind and say this one is!

Seriously, I loved it!

Just a couple of things though:

1) The diary entries are a bit confusing because it's hard to tell where one starts and another one ends. I think you should look into making each entry separate by using the horizontal ruler thing (or something like that).

2) Were they playing Scrabble or Pictionary? You mentioned guessing and drawing, so I don't think it's Scrabble.

Go write more! ;)

- Rebekah

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