9/10/2009 c1 1CaptainCharisma
Thanks for reviewing my story. I thought I would read one of yours in return.
I'm not quite sure if this is a stand-alone piece or part of something bigger due to the sudden ending, but it's a decent start if it's not finished.
Thanks for reviewing my story. I thought I would read one of yours in return.
I'm not quite sure if this is a stand-alone piece or part of something bigger due to the sudden ending, but it's a decent start if it's not finished.
8/28/2008 c1 4Pandora Caspian
Wow. Very good cliff hanger. It leaves me with many questions, and I figure its the point. Fantastic!
Wow. Very good cliff hanger. It leaves me with many questions, and I figure its the point. Fantastic!