for Phone Calls8/3/2012 c1 BlAcKMaCgICWoMeN
i dont get this your character point of view changes tom much as well as location where are they how many days has passed since the initial phone call
i dont get this your character point of view changes tom much as well as location where are they how many days has passed since the initial phone call
12/9/2011 c1 wasabi-angel
Time to run around in a circle and scream happily! :P Loved your oneshot! I think my favourite part was "Oh I'm sorry. He's a little old fashioned - could you ask me out instead?" Keep up the good work!
Time to run around in a circle and scream happily! :P Loved your oneshot! I think my favourite part was "Oh I'm sorry. He's a little old fashioned - could you ask me out instead?" Keep up the good work!
6/13/2011 c1 
16non.graceful
The ending was shit. That's all I have to say. Maybe you could add a bit more to make it better instead of the cliche "and they lived happily ever after. The end."
I mean, when they meet finally for The first time, isn't it meant to be somewhat speacial? I mean it doesn't have to be cheesy but it doesn't have to be overly bland either.
Eh.
You told us to review and I reviewed. Hope this doesn't let yOu down.
16non.gracefulThe ending was shit. That's all I have to say. Maybe you could add a bit more to make it better instead of the cliche "and they lived happily ever after. The end."
I mean, when they meet finally for The first time, isn't it meant to be somewhat speacial? I mean it doesn't have to be cheesy but it doesn't have to be overly bland either.
Eh.
You told us to review and I reviewed. Hope this doesn't let yOu down.
12/18/2010 c1 9Brolinshipper
I love you're stories:) I'm in the process of reaing them all, and i wasnt topping to review and im sorry for that, cus i get annoyed too, but anywho, I love this story. Andd all the ones before(which i have read already im going in order from when they were last updated)
9BrolinshipperI love you're stories:) I'm in the process of reaing them all, and i wasnt topping to review and im sorry for that, cus i get annoyed too, but anywho, I love this story. Andd all the ones before(which i have read already im going in order from when they were last updated)
5/31/2010 c1 blubbfreak
I'd like to see you running around in circles :-) fun story, I always love the sibling's-best-friend-thingy. And the fact that there are no stupid grammar or spelling mistakes just adds to the reading fun!
Thanks for sharing!
I'd like to see you running around in circles :-) fun story, I always love the sibling's-best-friend-thingy. And the fact that there are no stupid grammar or spelling mistakes just adds to the reading fun!
Thanks for sharing!
2/25/2010 c1 Hidden Flowers
Hilarious! I love it. Actually, I only review for things I either love or hate. Go figure.
Hilarious! I love it. Actually, I only review for things I either love or hate. Go figure.
7/31/2009 c1 31Hopelessly Cliche
Gosh, I've read this before but I can't believe I didn't review! :O Shame on me. Anywho, lovelovelove it! The first line just cracked me up. I love that volcano/hot reference, that was beautiful. Geddit? Yah, I'm weird, you might not.
Again, loved it! =)
Hope
xx
31Hopelessly ClicheGosh, I've read this before but I can't believe I didn't review! :O Shame on me. Anywho, lovelovelove it! The first line just cracked me up. I love that volcano/hot reference, that was beautiful. Geddit? Yah, I'm weird, you might not.
Again, loved it! =)
Hope
xx
2/18/2009 c1 2HiddenRoses.BlankPages
LOL, I like it! I would def threaten someone like she did people were prank calling me :)
2HiddenRoses.BlankPagesLOL, I like it! I would def threaten someone like she did people were prank calling me :)