
2/20/2012 c4
2PotOfGoldXxx
Love it :) I am a hundred percent sure that you could use this universe (with all the talents) and post a much longer story :D If you haven't already, I'll go check after this. But either way, I would love to read more of this universe with people having talents.

Love it :) I am a hundred percent sure that you could use this universe (with all the talents) and post a much longer story :D If you haven't already, I'll go check after this. But either way, I would love to read more of this universe with people having talents.
6/26/2011 c1
5Nell09
I loved your story. Its a sweetheart. Keep writing like that and you will find a very big fan of your writing in me.

I loved your story. Its a sweetheart. Keep writing like that and you will find a very big fan of your writing in me.
6/21/2010 c4
5Chris Rhyanne
Ah! I found it again! This lovely, charming story that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... Like I had just eaten a kitten! In a good way.
I love your style of writing. This was written beautifully, and with heart. I couldn't find the tiniest thing wrong with it even if I tried. Well, actually, the steryotypical spoiled little princess irked me to the moon and back, but then, this is a Cinderella story. On that note, I love the whole idea of a small and innocent gift. It's a nice changa from the suddenly superpowered heroines of today.
...What more can I say? Beautiful story. I loved it. Keep writing!

Ah! I found it again! This lovely, charming story that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... Like I had just eaten a kitten! In a good way.
I love your style of writing. This was written beautifully, and with heart. I couldn't find the tiniest thing wrong with it even if I tried. Well, actually, the steryotypical spoiled little princess irked me to the moon and back, but then, this is a Cinderella story. On that note, I love the whole idea of a small and innocent gift. It's a nice changa from the suddenly superpowered heroines of today.
...What more can I say? Beautiful story. I loved it. Keep writing!
4/12/2010 c4 MelodieCC
such a sweet ending! i think that it's a bit strange since you mix modern things with the long-ago time period but whatever... :)
such a sweet ending! i think that it's a bit strange since you mix modern things with the long-ago time period but whatever... :)
4/12/2010 c3 MelodieCC
I love it, I love it. it's kinda like Cinderella and i've always like Cinderella. :)
I love it, I love it. it's kinda like Cinderella and i've always like Cinderella. :)
9/9/2009 c4 Toomuchtimeonmyhands
This is sickeningly adorable(But a good kind of sickeningly adorable :) ) It's a very original and imaginative spin off of cinderella. I especially like the Talents you gave the characters. Sneezing green polka dots? Priceless XD
This is sickeningly adorable(But a good kind of sickeningly adorable :) ) It's a very original and imaginative spin off of cinderella. I especially like the Talents you gave the characters. Sneezing green polka dots? Priceless XD
7/11/2009 c1 MelodieCC
i think that this is a very cute and sweet story. it's like a different version of Cinderella and i've always love Cinderella the best. this story made me smile and i just really like it.
i think that this is a very cute and sweet story. it's like a different version of Cinderella and i've always love Cinderella the best. this story made me smile and i just really like it.
6/13/2009 c4 XxSiennaxX
Aww that's such a sweet story. I also love how the 'prince' can so plainly see the goodness of someone. Loved it :)
Aww that's such a sweet story. I also love how the 'prince' can so plainly see the goodness of someone. Loved it :)
8/16/2008 c4 struck
cute! I wish you made the ending a bit longer though really really cute!
cute! I wish you made the ending a bit longer though really really cute!
8/15/2008 c4
2DarkStarPhoenix
This is absolutely magnificently written. A very good rewrite of the classic Cinderella tale. I take my hat off to you. Well done!
...I am in the habit of giving concrit, but I can't think of anything I'm araid. So take that as a compliment!
DSP

This is absolutely magnificently written. A very good rewrite of the classic Cinderella tale. I take my hat off to you. Well done!
...I am in the habit of giving concrit, but I can't think of anything I'm araid. So take that as a compliment!
DSP
8/12/2008 c1 perfectsquares
I like the idea of talents; very creative! I was in the worst mood, and that cheered me right up. Loved it! :)
I like the idea of talents; very creative! I was in the worst mood, and that cheered me right up. Loved it! :)