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7/10/2009 c1 3BlaznFangurl
It is very interesting for a start.
10/12/2008 c14 8MidnightSeaNymph
er... That was an interesting end? Does that have it's own story?

The only complaint (or perhaps, more appropriately, constructive criticism) I have is that the story moved very fast. It was almost surreal.
9/21/2008 c14 mystic.fox
Oh wow, did not expect that to happen in the end. This was a good story and I enjoyed it :)
8/20/2008 c8 mystic.fox
I hope Josiah finds her soon because he seems like he is truly in love with Lillian. Update soon.
8/16/2008 c1 Myownvice
cute, i like where this is going
8/13/2008 c2 3write-the-world
I really like this story so far. Your style of writing is great; the descriptions (of the town and of Lillian) are awesome; the dynamics between Lillian and Joseph are perfect. I also love Joseph's voice; he's an interesting narrarator so far. I'll definitely be reading more, so please update soon.
8/13/2008 c1 J.S. Halloway
You are a decent writer, but I can't help but think that the storyline is stale and the dialogue is quite trite.

I think you would be more successfull if you wrote something more interesting that called for great description.(for you describe things quite lovely.)

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