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4/23/2018 c10 Guest
Hey I know it's been forever since you've updated, and I'm not sure if you're still writing; however, this is a great story, with an original plot, well-developed characters, and descriptions that had me immersed in the story. I sincerely hope you continue this story, even in the form of rough draft. I'd love to know what happens next, and I can't wait for the collision of Kyle's identities. How would Penny react? Could there be some sort of basketball showdown between Alex and Dylan? Dylan needs to be taken down a notch.
I usually don't post reviews like this... but I feel bad that the story was left untold here, where Penny hasn't found happiness yet. I hope you give her and Kyle a good resolution.
12/27/2016 c10 5marzmez
I see its been almost three years since you have updated this story. I understand how real life can get in the way of our muses. I would really like to fnd out what happens to this story, so I'm trying to send you e-waves off encouragement ~~~~~~~~~~~~~! I like the premise. I don't think I have encountered it being the boy in disguise before. It's a fun one!
4/24/2016 c10 7IcanzIIravor
I enjoyed reading this story. Looking forward to more.
5/25/2014 c10 DragonOwl
I loved reading this so much! Whether or not you carry this on, I really enjoyed reading this! Also, it's nice to read from a guy-who's-not-a-jerk's point of view. This idea is really unusual and I just loved it!
2/20/2014 c10 Guest
why dont u carry on this story?
12/15/2013 c10 PenguinLover33
Update soon! This story is great!
8/13/2013 c10 Guest
I am addicted.
7/19/2013 c10 17Minkaos
Wow, I just discovered your story and I'm finding it really intriguing! I'm really curious as to how it will all play out. Kyle has definitely woven an intricate web - but I really hope that in the end things will work out between him and Penny. They definitely deserve happiness after all the betrayal and hardships they've gone through. Can't wait to read more :)
6/22/2013 c10 7Ali-Kernschatten
It's really really good. Like really good. However, I don't like how you put other peoples' thoughts in present tense without any other distinguishing feature in chapter 9 (I think). It's kind of distracting for present tense to show up and disappear without warning, and it took me a bit to realize you were doing it on purpose. I don't know if anyone else commented on it, but I would either italicize all thoughts, or leave the thoughts in past tense, but that's just me. Good luck continuing!
2/21/2013 c10 Caverage
Damn girl, You got me addicted to this alter ago thing. Hope you find the time to update soon !
2/3/2013 c10 AnonymousReads
This story is really good and I can't wait to see what happens next. Your characters and plot are good and I can already tell Kyle/Alex are going to get caught in his lies. I feel bad for penny because she was crossed publicly but Kyle too because he was betrayed and had his dad die in the same day. Update soon. Please. :)
2/2/2013 c10 1Bookworm-At-Starbucks
Love to hear that you are coming back to Fictionpress! The update was awesome which means you still haven't lost you touch. Take your time with your stuff, we FictionPress readers are patient lots.
1/27/2013 c10 Evenstar1389
hey i enjoyed this story, thanks! i hope you're in the flow now because i reallyyyy wanna know what's gonna happen next
1/24/2013 c10 4Let'sGetDownToBusiness
You actually updated?! Whoa...I thought this story was long gone. Never thought I'll be happy to actually be wrong:)
Just keep updating. Okay? Okay.
1/24/2013 c10 reindrops
I waited a year for an update. I really thought you have already abandoned this one, but I'm so glad that I was wrong. I remember leaving you a message on Facebook and Tumblr asking you to update this. Haha. I had to read the story again from the beginning, but it was all worth it. I adore Penny and Kyle moments. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. Hopefully, I wouldn't have to wait long.
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