for Garden of Memories
428/14/2008 c1 FuelingtheFire
Fascinating...A few questions unanswered (what are the papers?) and it took me until James thought it to realize that Mariana was his sister. Despite any complaints I could muster, I really enjoyed this. It's a very original idea, and James is a good solid character. I don't know if you plan to continue this or if this is just a one-shot, but if you continued I would love to know more about Andrew's past and what exactly has made the Rembarrows this way...And are there more of them?
:P Overall enjoyable and leaving me with many questions that I would love to see answered in future installments.
Fascinating...A few questions unanswered (what are the papers?) and it took me until James thought it to realize that Mariana was his sister. Despite any complaints I could muster, I really enjoyed this. It's a very original idea, and James is a good solid character. I don't know if you plan to continue this or if this is just a one-shot, but if you continued I would love to know more about Andrew's past and what exactly has made the Rembarrows this way...And are there more of them?
:P Overall enjoyable and leaving me with many questions that I would love to see answered in future installments.