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8/17/2008 c1 1tonight we bloom
I love this poem!

I just recently started writing poetry for FictionPress and I would love for you to read & review some of my poems.

Feedback from a writer like you would mean the world to me! :)
8/16/2008 c1 43lookin4nemo
i love the rythm and u can just feel the emotion. if u do want it to be better...well...don't do anything to it! it is great. keep writing!

~nemo~
8/15/2008 c1 14ThisisWhereIComeIn
Very beautiful. I like the flow and the imagery a lot. Bravo!
8/15/2008 c1 102Charmingly Temporary
Aw it's a very sweet poem. :) I like how the line breaks seemed in places that didn't make perfect sens (such as "Out the window and down the/ street you walk underneath the stars of tomorrow.") The imagery was gorgeous, but I am bothered by the phrase "twinkling diamonds" being related to stars because it seems a tad cliche. Otherwise, it was a very well constructed poem. Very well done!

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