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11Lizabellhanson05
You're really good with figurative language! This is really a cool little poem:)
11Lizabellhanson05You're really good with figurative language! This is really a cool little poem:)
8/19/2008 c1 23fatbird33
very well written. i enjoyed how you repeated lines. and youhad good descriptions. keep it up.
23fatbird33very well written. i enjoyed how you repeated lines. and youhad good descriptions. keep it up.
8/18/2008 c1 108Qzie
Wow... that was pretty weird. But it's a good-weird. :) It's so fantastical and almost... agh, I can't think of the word. Dontcha hate it when that happens?
This really brings "method to my/his/her/their/our/whatever madness" to the mind. :) Very nice. ^^ Chat later. -Qzie
108QzieWow... that was pretty weird. But it's a good-weird. :) It's so fantastical and almost... agh, I can't think of the word. Dontcha hate it when that happens?
This really brings "method to my/his/her/their/our/whatever madness" to the mind. :) Very nice. ^^ Chat later. -Qzie
8/16/2008 c1 10Caecilia
I really liked this.
I especially love the second stanza, but I also love good rain imagery.
It's definitely a very unique poem, thank you for sharing it.
~~Beer Run August, at the Roadhouse [Link in profile]
~Caecilia
10CaeciliaI really liked this.
I especially love the second stanza, but I also love good rain imagery.
It's definitely a very unique poem, thank you for sharing it.
~~Beer Run August, at the Roadhouse [Link in profile]
~Caecilia
8/16/2008 c1 1Just Nilla
I love it! It's great! I'm sure this one could get published like Dandelion Wishes.
"butterfly’s wins" Wings, right?
"Someday I’ll pick up my pen
Someday I’ll place it upon the paper
But, oh woe is me, the ink ran out
A decade or so ago" This part is hilarious. It really made me laugh. Good job. I love it!
Great job, Danielle!
~Jen
1Just NillaI love it! It's great! I'm sure this one could get published like Dandelion Wishes.
"butterfly’s wins" Wings, right?
"Someday I’ll pick up my pen
Someday I’ll place it upon the paper
But, oh woe is me, the ink ran out
A decade or so ago" This part is hilarious. It really made me laugh. Good job. I love it!
Great job, Danielle!
~Jen